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Old 04-06-05, 03:52 PM   #1
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Old 04-06-05, 04:50 PM   #2
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peepin, dont like this slow beat or the opening adlibs but they aint there for n e thing special n e wayz. lyrics is aight. i dunno if im feelin ur emotion on sum partss. flow is on poiint for the most part tho. ur chorus is jus like the one i did awhile ago, word for word at sum parts. but yea, good chorus. i think u spend to much time talkin about how u better than every1 else but never tell us what u got that makes u so unique. n e one can get on a mic n say that they got what every1 else duznt. but u gotta tell us or show us y. no hate on ur track, just givin pros as well as cons so u can keep elevatin feel me? i think the beat is one u can grroove to but it got borin towards the end. it was aight, not ur best. coulda used a better tone of voice or sumthin i cant put my finger on it. but gud shat
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Old 04-06-05, 07:10 PM   #3
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Yo ya flow was crazy on this track....the beat was hot man....damn this is a pretty hot song...keep this up fam....~1

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Old 04-06-05, 07:43 PM   #4
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definately u have no emotion in this track.....flow in da first verse is choppy at times...hook is pretty good...second verse is making me tired due to lack of emotion...its soundin like u readin off paper and i dont like listening to tracks like dat....i cut it off early cus i really aint wanna hear da rest...wit more emotion i'd prolly listen to it again..but this shit was makin me tired
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Old 04-06-05, 09:12 PM   #5
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ive told u before what i think of this... anyone who says this has no emotion in it and shit obveously aint payin attention... this was ya best track ever in my opinion... shit was 100% on.... ive told u that before but i see people semi hatin on it so gotsta say it here
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Old 04-06-05, 11:36 PM   #6
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listening to it right now.. Nice beat.. lyrics so far is pretty good, and pretty creative. Your emotion is sorta there, but could feel emotion only because of the smooth beat.. and your flow is finally on point.. Your second verse is pretty nice.. The Chorus is pretty nice.. I personally like this song because these kind of songs are the type of songs I always do, and for the ppl that say this ain't good? Shyt, ya are deaf.. this is good, somethin i could hear in the radio.. so i suggest you show this to Lady Fiay lol.. but yeah.. the quality is pretty nice also, and the dubs is almost perfect.. nice job..

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Old 04-08-05, 12:10 AM   #7
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listened to the track... i didn't think it came off as boring, i see you came at this with a different approach than usual. I was feeling it. You didn't need no hardcore emotion, it's a laid back beat (in my opinion) so i think you did your job on this, it was a pretty hot track.. get at me
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Old 04-13-05, 03:51 PM   #8
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Old 04-14-05, 11:39 AM   #9
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Old 04-17-05, 07:44 PM   #10
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need more feed..
all i need is more feed. more feed.. lol
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Old 04-17-05, 09:11 PM   #11
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yea u lemme peep this on AIM...ya flow was good a lil too repetitive tho...your emotion was good, nice an laid-back but noticeable change ups....lyrically u didn't really say much...like omen said, u kept saying u the illest but u didn't say why....on a beat like this if u gon brag u should have ill punches and/or clever wordplay to wow people to give it that much more appeal...hook was decent jus seemed like multies was its focus....it wasn't really that catchy but decent enough to listen too...this would be a filler track on a album or mixtape...its very in btw.....not wack but not great neither jus okay.
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