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Old 10-04-07, 07:55 PM   #1
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....Death to NYC....

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hahaha....not even going off on this just putting u in your place NYC....


u nothing in this game trick your rhymes all played shit....
i'll break your frame with bricks you blow smoke never flames lit.....
so i'll put NYC in his place without the hard hit from my insane fist....
"glory" against us you'll "never have"....
.....like "armored warriors with spears against troops with explosives"...
like "raw sewage waste at trash facilites" your rhymes are "poop and suffer erosion"....
yeah u ok with the topicals but your diss skills deplete like "techniques"....
even he could put a nursury rhyme together better than what u key.....
i guess we hurt your emotions so u "breaking down".....
.....singing to yourself mariah carey and bone thugs song break down.....
this fake clown is not in my league dont know why im wasting time....
especially against a bitter as scanz said u are.....
......u dont type ....all u do is copy and paste lines!.....
putting down paragraphs of verses like u gonna get props for typing a biography.....
but like "non victorious clans suffering mass deaths" your rhymes "never astonishing"....
as i "spit" i get closer to putting your "soul to rest"....
.....like a "spitting cobras poison landing directly on your chest!".....
and after the venoms cease your hearts beat session....
......i'll resurrect u then "bury u alive" like "patients in a coma mistaken for being dead!".....
i'll force lethal paint down your throat just to prove i could force feed u lead.....
then watch u be "sick throwing up blood" like if "tuberculosis invaded your life to end".....
and yeah these are "fighting words" giving u "more beatings"...
....than your "father with the extension cord child abusing u every week"....
i dunno why u even tryed to speak you'll just get "assassinated quick".....
.....like the "conspiracy against Alexander the Great".....
so like "viral contaminated victims lying in hospital beds"....
....you'll "wake up and realise death is your fate".....
im a "savage beast hungry" so i'll "eat away" your soft punch attempts....
....like "lion jaws on gazelles" till there bodies broken in bloody pieces and pinned....
you just wont get this win you'll just stay in the "lost"....
....like "being stuck in the deserts of the middle east"......
and when i make punches "connect together right"....
they'll bring "distress" to u like the "orthodontist ripping out braces and teeth".....
you in "danger" kid so u better "take cover".....
.....like "hidding in between barriars to avoid an incoming mortar round"....
cause the blows i bring are "heavy" like "penetrated wounds by shrapnel"....
....and they'll "bring u to the dirt"....like "liver and spleen remains left on the ground".....
theres no point in going on forever "tearing" you "apart" like "wrapped presents"....
just keep your mouth closed and maybe this shit wont be endless....



fuck it im done.....i'll let the rest of 300 handle u.....



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Old 10-04-07, 07:58 PM   #2
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Old 10-04-07, 08:10 PM   #3
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Not giving much feed but it wasnt bad, and I read part of what the other guy posted and this beats that, I just dont like all the quotations, na mean?
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Old 10-04-07, 08:26 PM   #4
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yeah i feel u on the quotations....the only reason i do them is cause theres those out there that "read shit to fast" and wont understand the punch...metaphor or creativity the way its suppose to go cause i do shit sort of well different lolz if u noticed....so i figure if i put the quotations they'll read it slower and understand better....but im not insulting a vets intelligence...like yours...i know yall understand with out the quotations......im talkin bout those that dont know creativity very well....but yeah lolz....~1~
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Old 10-04-07, 10:20 PM   #5
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good shit as always.. u know jg always down with haters... fuck nyc im finished with the cat anyways.. nice drop.. haha first time i seen u diss that long.. nice drop tho.. some multies nice creativity in some lines.. structure was kinda fucked up tho... makes me lose flow but all good... overall this was a pretty good diss...
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Old 10-11-07, 12:38 PM   #6
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