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Old 12-24-03, 05:17 PM   #1
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The MeltDown{dissen some kat AS-IS}

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whatcha gonna do when i'm ready 4 showdown//
better run for ya crew when it goes down//
it's to late to try get any help now//
you should situate ya self for the meltdown//

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You's unheard, like fucken sign language//
I'll kill ya words, with disfuntional manners//
You battlen me, is the way you get on the banners//
Put 16 bars to ya like ah Joe Montana//{J.Montana = #16}

Yes ya best believe your D.ead O.n A.rrival//
Ya chest will bleed, like shooting lead from the rifle//
You scared as fuck of me, like you fled from the 5-0//
From audio to a textee, Red is your rival//

What is there to lose, what is there to prove//
i'll break you dude, till ya on breaking news//
i earned a place in the game, i payed my dues//
i'm hotter then you, even Satin knew//

ya never last man standing, like reacting Gandi//
how u gonna kill me, when i'm hiphops zombie//
your in need for treatments, like fatal disorders//
i'm ready for beef, Can i take your order?//
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whatcha gonna do when i'm ready 4 showdown//
better run for ya crew when it goes down//
it's to late to try get any help now//
you should situate ya self for the meltdown//

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Theres only one throne, for me and my microphone//
you get no props, cause you is unknown//
ya audios are turn offs, like a fucking ugly bitch//
only chicks ya got, is the ones on ya buddy list//

rhymes cause crimes, investigate the scene//
your left behind, broken chest plate and spleen//
only fags dig ya style, cause ya shit is gay//
turn around ya name child, cause you just a sis-a// {A-S.I.S}

i'll give you the boot, like some fucken tim sneakers//
your already 6 feet deep, and i want you deeper//
more personailtys, then that golem creature//{3d dude on LORD OF THE RINGS}
your thrown in the outtakes, i'm the special feature//

you might-a passed in text, but this is the audio world//
there ain't come backs, like when you cum inside a girl//
listen to ya self bitch, can't cha tell//
you was never fresh like virgins in a jail cell//
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whatcha gonna do when i'm ready 4 showdown//
better run for ya crew when it goes down//
it's to late to try get any help now//
you should situate ya self for the meltdown//

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the only way you testin me, is if i gave you a sample//
fucka round with me, and azz get trampled//
cut you up, and put you up on my mantle//
then Eat cha Adams apple, and make Eve get jealous//

not just you but cha whole punk azz crew felt it//
you running out the battle, like the ink from ya felt tip//
throw up the beef in the air, like a bulimic spitta//
you losing this battle, ain't hard to picture//

haven't you read lately, im the most hated but greatest//
splitting your image when i slice ya face in 8 fifths//
obsurb your career descend, in the matix//
i kill emcees lyrically , cause i'm a lyrical driller//

your lucky its lyrics , and not bullets//
because i'd be named a fucken serial killer//
you just met the heat, prepare to see hot flashs//
this diss is complete, ya left at a stop as-is//
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whatcha gonna do when i'm ready 4 showdown//
better run for ya crew when it goes down//
it's to late to try get any help now//
you should situate ya self for the meltdown//

(2x)
-----------------LO-FI HI-FI


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HOLLA AT CHA BOY///
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Old 12-25-03, 02:08 PM   #2
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Old 12-29-03, 08:33 PM   #3
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this song was aight...beat was tight...lyrics was good...hook was aight to...emotion was tight..all around good track..i liked this drop..not ur best..but it was good...nice work...
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Old 12-29-03, 11:23 PM   #4
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im liken beat intro............ your voice is good. quality is kinda bad....... you sound like nyce quota.. your voice is like his to me. your flow is shakey. sounds like you aint comfortable with the flow.............. chorus is loud.. i dunno. 2nd verse is to low. yall gotta learn how to eq... sounds like you just used nose reduction....... and left it. its still a coo track. keep goin and elevate.
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Old 12-30-03, 01:21 AM   #5
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thanks dawg..
yea it could of been better, but i had the flu when i flowed that....
thanks for the feed tho/...
uppen
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