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Check in by: 08-28-04 at 05:44 AM

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kahdaffi_black has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-04 04:46 AM.

this is a verse classic fo real kahdaffi_black peep it yo.
Im heckle where be my brother jeckle black crow pie keeps the renisance alive, im a king like chris webber , I burger biches cuzz I think it’s time.
My bullets so heavy u can anchor the ferry im mgm like tom and jerry I I rush fools like my name was barry.
My bullets are made from lithium shoot ya in the face and blow into the space and time continuum.
My trees r tropical like palms my first video was in association with Viacom.
I got that kiwi green cammaro im that extra that played in broken arrow.You can call me yogurt but I don’t Yoplait around I got so much cable you can call me
Under ground, just like a storm im raining on ya parade my bullets r sour like unsweetend kool-aid

NewKid has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-04 05:07 AM.

u steppin 2 me n ya flow is lousy yo..
i burn u n ya raps like wen u get hit 4rm tha calico..
no wonda u a "Rookie" thas soft like a cookie who can get fired up wit dat cali dro..

i can make u tha first nigga n history ta spit 1 verse n retire..
n u winnin this battle is juss ya desire..


ya flow aint interseting so stick video games..
ya record gon stay 1-0 but tha wins wont change..

cant rap..so juss get lessons 4rm Brian Mcknight..
n "Black"i got gats thall turn ya "Kahdaffi" white..

cant b a "Outlaw" if u was rockin a black scarf..
spit tha punchline n have u frooze like Jack Frost..
i "Stretch" u n leave u wit 2 heads like kat dawg..

juss leave yo theeze otha niggaz aint gon b missin u..
n mah flow spit "DANGER" jus ass mystikal..
talkin shit wont have u walkin cus tha 9 gon cripple u..

i have ya family missin u like diddy did j-lo..
spray paint ya face on a wall like 50 did yayo..

u aint a G nietha n cali i bet u live n tha safe part..
but still i tag u up like dem clothes at K-mart..

i treat ya family like a ps2 game let me "Borrow" ya sista..
n i have u trapped n a "Phonebooth" like Forrest Whittaka

Voted For: NewKid

none of the other guys stuff was rhyming and it was just totally whack, the other guy needs to elevate..Newkid urs was structured rhymed had good punches and personals.

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uppin 4 sum votes ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^6

IT's coo i rapped this when i was 8 years old yo had to put some retro into my stepp yo upping for votes^^^^

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KAHDAFFI_BLACK ( THE BLACK REPUBLIC )

" i had ailen women suck me off, when god said let there be light i turned it the fuck off, and that's the reason earth is only 5 billion years old, i made the sunshine and permitted time to unfold,the suface was lava but when i stepped down it became cold, fuck what u been told" (IMMORTAL TECHNIQUE)

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Voted For: NewKid

pretty weak battle..but i gotta go wit newkid on this
he had some punches, not the best, but they were there and ur flow was iight but it could use work
kahdaffi urs was iight for a freestyle but u didnt have any punches and thats wut a battle is, u got to go at the guy u battlin dawg, no hate jus elevate in that aspect
v/newkid

Voted For: NewKid

NK u won this hands down. your verse made sense. structure and flow go to NK. punches im not really sure. NK had more, but KB hit a bit harder. cept for the kool aid, unsweetened kool aid is bitter, not sour. im not in the mood to quote wut i liked so. peace

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Voted For: NewKid

this was a very on sided battle so ima have to give this one to new kid

Kahdaffi:
your verse was pretty good but i really wasnt feelin half of it ..some of the ryhmes didnt make sense, your structure was off.. and that made your verse hard to read, overall you had a weak verse ,next time come harder and elevate

Newkid-
Nice verse son this was one of the first verses ive been from you and you really surprised me it was alittle weak but you won you had some nice personals' ,decent okay punchlines, structure was way better then k so that is why you won..
overall keep elevating decent battle

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