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Johnny C. 0 0%
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Old 10-21-03, 03:55 PM   #1
LM
Drop Of Genius
 
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From: The promised land
LM vs Johnny C

IP: 509D 5063

10-12 lines
No d/r and all that
I'll spit first
Votes must be explained and dont forget to poll them


Ok here's my verse:

I'm gonna use you to prove I'm lyrically inerlectual/
Everybodie's gonna merk you, it'll become a religious ritual/
There's a story bout you winnin battles but it's fictional/
Maybe you'll find it in the library/
You'll never win a battle, coz nobody on rb gives in to bribery/
You can call goin against me a mini-rivalry, which could easily explode/
Turn into somethin you cant control, then I'll switch to attack mode/
Punch you to the ground til your flesh starts to corode/
Rip out your bones and sell 'em off like elephant tusks bein sold/
Do you really want me to carry on, I can go from dawn to dusk/
But I'll stop now coz for the time bein I'll leave you concust



Good luck, drop 2morrow dawg
Peace!!!
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Old 10-21-03, 04:01 PM   #2
LM
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From: The promised land
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^^^^Not one of my better verses but fuck it^^^^ Good luck Johnny.............................



Peace!!!
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Old 10-21-03, 04:01 PM   #3
Eloquence
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cool drop i guess, but please attend to someone who desires your raw fleh today and not tomorrow, I'm hungry.
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Old 10-21-03, 04:03 PM   #4
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From: The promised land
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Go set up Orakilla and I'll just keystyle somethin of the top of my head.............................................. ..................
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Old 10-21-03, 04:11 PM   #5
quise__baby
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From: OH-DIME,OH10,OHIO
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awww man


i dont think u was workin wit dat verse my dude


u need a lil more help my dude

cuz i didnt like it

check mine out
 
Old 10-21-03, 04:12 PM   #6
quise__baby
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its in da battle room


legendary mc vs quise baby


now thats how u spit

i can help u out on urs if u want lool
 
Old 10-21-03, 04:28 PM   #7
LM
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I didnt like my verse either. I liked the opener, that's about it. All help will be appreciated......................................



Peace!!!
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Old 10-21-03, 06:01 PM   #8
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how bout alll u niggas go vote on my shit

n then wont somebody come n battle me so i can lite they ass up


cuz yall niggas need to read my shit hard

legendary mc vs quise_baby

vote on dat shit


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Old 10-22-03, 11:59 AM   #9
LM
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From: The promised land
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If anybody came in here to vote then your too early. He aint dropped his verse yet. But can ya's vote on this please:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8550#post858550


Peace!!!
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Old 10-22-03, 04:32 PM   #10
Johnny C.
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From: inside lil A's mind...
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HERE YA ARE DAWG:

mah opposition is wishin he could get this repitition
an in addition, his proposition has him outta commition
i'm OUTTA this bitch, an i'm gonna do a transmition
untill yer fuckin intuition has givin me recognition
and, about me winnin battles, that aint a shit load of fiction
i dont care what u say, but listin 2 mah prediction:
you're definite-ly less than a mini-rival-ry
and u're beginnin 2 see- that i'm a winnin MC!
and though i've been in the sea, i'm still a sinnin MC-
winnin in tha beginnin of--------- this r.b!
sellin elephant tusks?!! i ain't as WHACK as ya'
i'll smack yer whack rap back 2 africa!
but I'M just ac-tin, duh! But YER not ac-tin dumb-
u're always fuckin stupid, and u take it up tha bum!
 
Old 10-22-03, 04:41 PM   #11
Johnny C.
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From: inside lil A's mind...
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sorry i went a little over.............................................. .................................................. ........................................ it's 14 lines instead of 12, but those xtra 2 lines NEEDED to be there! naw' mean?
any wayz:
LM: YOU DID PRETTY FRIGGIN GOOD BACK THURR, DAWG; I REALLY LIKED YOUR ENDING- "...LEAVE YOU CONCUST." THAT WAS TIGHT! THE ONLY THING I THOUGHT WAS NOT RIGHT WUZ THA FLOW... BUT THEN AGAIN, I DON'T KNOW WUT BEAT YOU WERE FLOWIN' TO! KEEP IT UP, DAWG, AND KEEP THE PEACE.
- NNY

PS: ANYONE WILLING TO VOTE, PLEASE DO SO SOON... IT'D BE GREATLY APRECIATED! THANX!!!!
 
Old 10-22-03, 04:42 PM   #12
Onslaught-X
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whoa Johnny C u really improved since our battle .... or that was one of your bad verses anyway ..................i would tell u who i think won but whats the point i aint got 100 posts
 
Old 10-22-03, 04:46 PM   #13
LM
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Johnny C. I loved your verse. I agree with Onslaught. I'm guilty of underestermatin ya after your battle with him. Good work.

Peace!!!


Whoever votes on this can ya's vote here to:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86967
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Old 10-22-03, 04:53 PM   #14
Johnny C.
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From: inside lil A's mind...
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HEY THANX DUDES............................................. ...........................
.................................................. ...................
.............................BY THE WAY, ONSLAUGHT, I REALLY LIKED UR VERSE, TOO.
 
Old 10-22-03, 05:03 PM   #15
Da_Legend
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dont know but verses werent that hot and Johnny was merely rhyming and not landing disses

mah opposition is wishin he could get this repitition
an in addition, his proposition has him outta commition
i'm OUTTA this bitch, an i'm gonna do a transmition
untill yer fuckin intuition has givin me recognition
^^ just multis n rhyme, no hits made, feel me

I'd have to give this to LM, he was focusing more on disses


yet sayin that, both of u guys need elevation tho

hit this battle up, its almost over
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86988
 
 


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