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View Poll Results: Who Won Dis Muphucka?
Re$TricTed 5 62.50%
:.anxiety.: 3 37.50%
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Old 07-28-04, 09:56 AM   #1
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R-Rated Vs. Anxiety

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.::Rules::.

5 Bars Maximum
No Crew Votes
No Hate Votes
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Blind Spits Due Today

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Old 07-28-04, 09:58 AM   #2
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.::CH-CHeck::.

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Old 07-28-04, 03:17 PM   #3
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Check...
 
Old 07-28-04, 03:46 PM   #4
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My bad R... I got to go to the movie (lets see if that is in his verse)... Dont drop yet if you dont wanna... Im gonna meet the deadline though... Peace...
 
Old 07-28-04, 08:10 PM   #5
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R was up in the awards thread, only saying his own name like Pikachu...
But from the opinions other vets have, seems no one agrees with you...
Cant Impersonate the Impersonator? Restricted lately has been angry...
Since you failed to Impersonate, seems the impersonators Slim Shady...
Your tellin people that saying you lost to DR votes is a whack excuse...
Refresh my memory, but isnt that what u said when you lost to looch...
You were once considerd the best, no one here could take you down...
Now when people put u at the top, cant explain how sad that sounds...
Interesting how u offered to make a poll to get you out of phase one...
And after a few of our members bitched at you, you never made one...

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It Was 5-4...You Got Rode Plus I Barely Spit...

You Wanna Go Again Dats Straight.....How About Audio? Or You Can't Do That Yet?

~R~
 
Old 07-28-04, 08:15 PM   #6
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Changed Ya Name..You're Signed In..But What You Trying To Prove?
Cause You Was Getting Disresepcted Back When I Was A Newb..
This Dude Was Meant To Be Sonned Since Birth..Ya Mom Bothered and Wild..
I Would've Had My Child Aborted Before I Ever Fathered Your Style..
By The Way You Ducking..It's Obvious You Need Protection..
Cause The Illest You Ever Got Was Coppin A Yeast Infection..
Watch The Pixels Scream As I Make Your System Bleed Glitches..
I Hope Your Pussy's Trimmed And Clean..Cauase I Tend To Eat Bitches..
Your Bitten Pre-Write's Are Ripped With Vicious Heartlessness..
Sorry Kid but You're About As Live As Abortion Clinic Garbage Is..

~R~
 
Old 07-28-04, 08:18 PM   #7
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Lets get some votes... Nice spit...
 
Old 07-28-04, 10:24 PM   #8
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hmm..

anxiety:i thought this was a good simples verse.. no wordplay, but personals were there.. flow was the same, but a little stretched..just tiny bit.. Overal pretty good...


~R~: hmm its dragged at the begginging.. it picked up a lil bit in the middle.. i thought this verse didnt do you justice compared to the others.. but its was definatly less stretched then i normally see you come.. flow was actually pretty good in this.. no personals.. some ok metas.. is say a decent average verse...


my vote gotta go to anxiety for making it more personal...
holla back if you need me to further explain or do a verse break down.. im kinda tired right now
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Old 07-28-04, 10:43 PM   #9
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He Had No Personals LOL...Just Assumptions..

Wow..Get OUtta Here Your Wack...

~R~
 
Old 07-28-04, 10:51 PM   #10
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This Was A Dope Battle Straight Up Feeling Both Of Your Verses

Anexity-You Came NiCe You Had Some Good Personals Couple Lines That Made Me Laugh So Pretty NiCe Drop....

Opener..R was up in the awards thread, only saying his own name like Pikachu...
But from the opinions other vets have, seems no one agrees with you...

Laughter LOL Nice 9/10

BestLine..You were once considerd the best, no one here could take you down...
Now when people put u at the top, cant explain how sad that sounds...

9.3/10 Good..

Closer..Interesting how u offered to make a poll to get you out of phase one...
And after a few of our members bitched at you, you never made one...

^^ NiCe Personal But Didnt Finish It..7.6/10 Kinda Weak

~R~NiCe Drop Verse Was Sick Made Me Laugh On And Off Hott Shit....

Opener..Changed Ya Name..You're Signed In..But What You Trying To Prove?
Cause You Was Getting Disresepcted Back When I Was A Newb..

Nice Open..9.1/10

Bestline..By The Way You Ducking..It's Obvious You Need Protection..
Cause The Illest You Ever Got Was Coppin A Yeast Infection..

Laughter ^^ NiCe Punch...9.4/10

Closer..Your Bitten Pre-Write's Are Ripped With Vicious Heartlessness..
Sorry Kid but You're About As Live As Abortion Clinic Garbage Is..

LMFAO...^^ 9.7/10 Funny Shit...

Winner~R~....Anxiety Props On Your Drop playBoy....
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Old 07-28-04, 10:55 PM   #11
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Re$TricTed
He Had No Personals LOL...Just Assumptions..

Wow..Get OUtta Here Your Wack...

~R~


Yo im done with this beef so dont mistake this for dragging it on... But how did i have no personals? You once nominated yourself for almost every award... You were once considered the best... You once impersonated shady... You told someone that DR votes is a whack excuse, and then said what is in that quote to looch... You talked about making a thread to see if people want you out of phase one... Hmm... Seems like pretty much every line has one... No beef dawg... Just saying...
 
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~R~, i aint got shit against you.. i just wont ryde you.. he did have personals.. your a panzy for lashin out just because i didnt vote for you.... stop that girly shit.. be a man and except votes when they dont go your way, and enjoy them when they do.. tired of lil bitches whining aobut hate votes and shit.. my votes are fair and deserving.... Get over it.
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Old 07-28-04, 11:57 PM   #13
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Anxiety's Drop:


R was up in the awards thread, only saying his own name like Pikachu...
But from the opinions other vets have, seems no one agrees with you...
hhahaha liked the pikachu line 2nd line was good
but not as well done as the 1st lines 7.5/10

Cant Impersonate the Impersonator? Restricted lately has been angry...
Since you failed to Impersonate, seems the impersonators Slim Shady...
hhahhaha nice its pretty good you got ill flow mayn.....7/10
Your tellin people that saying you lost to DR votes is a whack excuse...
Refresh my memory, but isnt that what u said when you lost to looch...
wow....personals good good..........8/10
You were once considerd the best, no one here could take you down...
Now when people put u at the top, cant explain how sad that sounds...
it hit him but not that hard it was simple but
complex I can't even understand myself lol 6.5/10

Interesting how u offered to make a poll to get you out of phase one...
And after a few of our members bitched at you, you never made one...
nice nice personals true I believe??????8/10

OVERALL: 8.4/10 ILL FLOW


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Changed Ya Name..You're Signed In..But What You Trying To Prove?
Cause You Was Getting Disresepcted Back When I Was A Newb..
a personal nice nice opener 7/10
This Dude Was Meant To Be Sonned Since Birth..Ya Mom Bothered and Wild..
I Would've Had My Child Aborted Before I Ever Fathered Your Style..
wow I like it 7/10
By The Way You Ducking..It's Obvious You Need Protection..
Cause The Illest You Ever Got Was Coppin A Yeast Infection..
not feeling this one much because you know
disease lines are played mayn.....6/10

Watch The Pixels Scream As I Make Your System Bleed Glitches..
I Hope Your Pussy's Trimmed And Clean..Cauase I Tend To Eat Bitches..
haha pretty good mayn liked the punch 6.5/10
Your Bitten Pre-Write's Are Ripped With Vicious Heartlessness..
Sorry Kid but You're About As Live As Abortion Clinic Garbage Is..
whoa!!! this was hott 8/10


OVERALL: 7.5/10 GOOD FLOW ASWELL


VOTE: ANXIETY NICE BATTLE HERE MAYN...
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oh ya forgot do a vote on my battle link in sig going in circles.....
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Old 07-29-04, 12:24 AM   #15
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good battle one of the best i actually read on this site

anyways

anxiety u had some hard punches incorporated within ur verse
nice concepts and a few personals
ur font size is gay tho and i had to wear glasses for it
ur structure is decent but the quoting is quite gay

r-rated
u concepts of punches were alil better
some quotable lines but i wont get that in depth
ur personals were nice too
and ur color is gay

in the end i think r took this his punches were more direct and the structure was better

avoid the elipsises yall
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