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6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 09-16-04 at 06:57 PM

Must drop verse in 50 minutes after check in.

-EXPLICIT- has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 06:29 PM.

Good Luck Ecko...

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==>ECKO<== has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 06:32 PM.

Yo.. you rap wack.. I saw your last battle… you lack rap //
When this kid spits. all ya hear is an Echo.not even a clap// *
Fuck rap… Ill “terrorize” this emcee fuck it ill just hush yah //
Leavin yo body drippin blood like that school in “Russia” // &
Merk this Californian so bad you’ll be callin me the terminator //=
You have about as much chance as the US electin Ralph Nader //
You beating me is like attempts at “showing” me “smell” //
Fake thug as well.. "stepping on snails" is the only time ya "bust a shell" //
Here from the start.. yet the only way to win is if he battles a ghost.. //$
Fuck it.. Your done.. You winnin is like pac reppin the east coast //+


Explinations –

*Echo = Ecko.. Name play…
& line above included.. wordplay in it = the terrorist attack at a Russian school
= Terminator = Govenor of cali
$ Sig.. Here from the start.. aka you think he would be good..
+ Pac repped the west.. aka Cali..

Good Luck.. IF YOU DONT GET SOMETHING.. DONT VOTE

whos explicit? wit 3 wins and a thousand sum posts*
thinkin he's the shit when im like the holy ghost
only free posts or did he just restart his re_cord**
cuz like empire your bitch ass is gonna be ignored
so u can drop the parental advisery playboy
cuz i never knew ur shit was explicit u brave boy
makin lies witchua name..thinkin u gon gain fame
put a bullet to ya frame,put shame to ya fams name
cuz u got murdered by ecko..thats why im already proclaimin' this
or was your bitch ass to scared you jus happened to slice ya wrist

* has 3 wins and over 1,000 some posts
** has three wins with over 1000 posts...hows that? he must of
restarted he record or something

aight good luck too....everyone vote on this!! dont sleep on it!!

Transfered Posts man... but w/e lol No one can see this so no sway lol

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Voted For: -EXPLICIT-

YO, Explicit got this one, he had very good wordplay and his punches hit much harder.
Ecko, verse was good, but it just wasnt all there.

Weerd

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Voted For: -EXPLICIT-

ahhhh kinda one-sided to me

ecko-i expected more from ya

i liked the parental advisory line
(i hope i'm not the only one who got it)

but the rest of your verse didn't compare to explicit's
wordplay and punches

the opener for him had me goin OOOOOO

jus like my title

and the russia line was tight

he wins by hotness

~1~

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=149782

return favor

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Uppin..........

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Voted For: -EXPLICIT-

Yo.. you rap wack.. I saw your last battle… you lack rap //
When this kid spits. all ya hear is an Echo.not even a clap// *
^^nice opener
Fuck rap… Ill “terrorize” this emcee fuck it ill just hush yah //
Leavin yo body drippin blood like that school in “Russia” // &
^^decent
Merk this Californian so bad you’ll be callin me the terminator //=
You have about as much chance as the US electin Ralph Nader //
^^was'nt feelin this much
You beating me is like attempts at “showing” me “smell” //
Fake thug as well.. "stepping on snails" is the only time ya "bust a shell" //
^^liked this,showing smell<nice
Here from the start.. yet the only way to win is if he battles a ghost.. //$
Fuck it.. Your done.. You winnin is like pac reppin the east coast //+
^^good closer


whos explicit? wit 3 wins and a thousand sum posts*
thinkin he's the shit when im like the holy ghost
^^1st line good setup,but 2nd was boarderline self glorification
only free posts or did he just restart his re_cord**
cuz like empire your bitch ass is gonna be ignored
^^wasnt feelin this...
so u can drop the parental advisery playboy
cuz i never knew ur shit was explicit u brave boy
^^weres the punch?
makin lies witchua name..thinkin u gon gain fame
put a bullet to ya frame,put shame to ya fams name
^^weak
cuz u got murdered by ecko..thats why im already proclaimin' this
or was your bitch ass to scared you jus happened to slice ya wrist
^^weak closer....

aight this battle was 1 sided,explicit had nice structure good flow n consistent well setout punches some hit some missed ,ecko,your whole verse was lackin punches,some good ideas but you werent capitalizing on them,try n refrain from saying -im-in comparison my flow n shit like that it comes off as self glorification....give my vote to explicit 4 better punches with some nice wordplay...
return the favour...
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

Voted For: -EXPLICIT-

Nice battle on both cats accounts...i think EXPLICIT GOT this because his verse was better layed out...EXPLICIT had the punches and personals too...the structure and flow again Explicit i liked the colouring in ur verse too...

ECKO a nice verse from yaself but i feel ya needed to step up in this...and it didn't happen so my advice to you would to be keep workin on ur verses ur a good cat wit sum skills...they need to be released...

V/EXPLICIT

RTF on this link http://community.rapverse.com/showb...27&page=2&pp=15

I voted so it would be unfair wouldn't it?

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