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07-08-02, 02:10 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Increase The Peace
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first ever post and its quite shit but me feedback plz
This lyrical beat goes out to everyone on the street... (spoken) it aint just like Tupac said "strictly for ma niggaz" its a shame that niggas dead but "Life Goes On", i aint here to see how many brothers a can crap upon why is it we cant all get along everone askin people where they from u give a bad answer, we lose all sense of right and wrong boom! ones in ya dome testifying this shit through song should we all move away to fuckin hong kong? yo cuz we'r all stuck on a plateau now wotch this ice flow go, from insane to extreme do ya know what a mean am i as smooth as james dean? am a HIP HOP lyrical spittin machine ma flow aint all jumpy like no trampoline... now lets take this under..the water-aqautic-submarine because underground rappers... they never get the green am on the scene, dont dare to intervene are we al stuck in a violent routine? i see more deaths than u do on the big screen stil a teen why do youths need to fire a gat to be seen... Increase The Peace |
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07-08-02, 02:37 PM | #2 | ||||||
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decent peice. good multi use of hooks. like he subject matter, but the topic from 1 hook 2 another did seem overcluttered. not bad though for a first drop. stay up and active. peace.
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07-08-02, 07:19 PM | #3 | ||||||
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*nods* not bad...good topic...flow was pretty good too...very nice for a first drop...keep elevatin....
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07-08-02, 07:59 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: CF78 5104
ty joey good consturctive critisism
thnx Diz Peace.. |
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