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01-18-04, 10:41 AM | #1 | |||||||
Aint Nobody Iller Than Me
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Y'all need to check this
IP: C4AB 9642
This whole damn song is about "friends". There's no chorus for it yet but when it's finished i'll edit it in.
[Verse 1] Friends... Nobody knows the meaning of the word How it came about, is here or occured It's an alias for backstabbing people Those who are liars, punks who deceit you Claiming to have your back until you turn around And realise they're gone, nowhere to be found Forced to share the planet wit' these pricks They all should be put to rest under six Can see betrayal when you look in their eyes 'Cause they're really your enemies in disguise Just wanna grab 'em by the throat and squeeze Til their dead weight and weak at the knees I've thrown "trust" out the window long ago Why give it to someone who's really your foe? I hate them, why did God create them? I wanna knock them to the ground and stomp them Frustration inside me has reached it's limit These pussies, I swear are gonna get it [Verse 2] This is what I turned into and have come to feel Some say I have no feelings and a heart of steel You would too if you observe what I do Or know the type of shit that i've gone through Won't settle until they get what they deserve Waiting on the day for justice to be served I wasn't born angry, I just growed to be After living in such a corrupted society No matter where you go they're omnipresent How many on earth? One-hundred percent Leeches that wanna suck you for everything your worth That's how it's been since the homo sapien birth I'm like a ticking time bomb waiting to explode I feel like i'm just gonna some day up and erode Aint got no sympathy for bitches like these There's no getting rid of like an uncureable disease My loins quiver as the thought crosses my mind That me and these low lifes are of the same kind [Verse 3] Maybe you don't understand where i'm coming from How I got here, when and how come It's 'cause of an asshole who left me high and dry Just took off one day with no explanation why And I aint gonna lie, it did hurt for awhile I was uncontrollably depressed and hostile Swore to myself I would never let it happen again I wouldn't be played by another "friend" I stand by my word, keeping that promise That's how it's gonna be til I no longer exist Who need s them? Just to destroy your life Waiting on the chance to cut your throat with a knife Not this time, you come around me you're dead This aint no joke, you heard what I said You don't deserve this much attention That's why your name was never mentioned This song is for you, so listen to what I say I hate you! I despise you! More each day |
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01-18-04, 11:42 AM | #2 | |||||||
New to RB
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IP: 80EF 45DD
yo man dis is a hot peice 4 sure
da concept was hot i havent seen it b4 around here, der r alot of shade niggaz in da world, stay up peace oh ya check my diss 2 Legendz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107855
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01-18-04, 12:05 PM | #3 | |||||||
Aint Nobody Iller Than Me
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IP: C4AB 9642
Thanks.
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01-18-04, 12:14 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 5AF5 5CA5
thought this was a pretty decent peice.... in places the ryhming could have been carried further, to help the flow... and in some places the scheme seemed pretty basic, but it stayed on topic, and a good length....
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01-18-04, 01:44 PM | #5 | |||||||
Aint Nobody Iller Than Me
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IP: C4AB 9642
Thanks for your oppinion.
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01-18-04, 01:50 PM | #6 | ||||
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IP: 399E F0FD
..I liked this...it was a little sloppy on some places..but..no one is 'perfect'(maybe me??...LOl~)..anyway..I thought your content was good and it flowed well..that's all folks~~~~
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01-19-04, 12:24 PM | #7 | |||||||
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