i'm in, let's go like 14

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Alright



Drop soon as you can.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237916
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238043
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237919
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237987

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Ya girls like a hotel, so no kid ya didnt choose a winner.
Cuz i paid for one night... n' the next fuckin day a new dude was in her.
I'll have ya body zipped up if ya begin dissin' these.
And create a T-Bag that'll bring back memories of what ya bitch did to me.
I asked a dude if he knew u, and if ya shit's the wackest.
He said yea i gnome, his skills are a myth and they only reach midget status.
Teflon's a perfect name for you, i mean honestly brother.
Cuz ya spend ya time huggin one guys chest while takin shots from another.
We know u look and act retarded, start believin' that i'm right.
I saw tef yellin '' da da daaaa''.. but he's never hearda Mencia in his life.
Ya ain't proof God has a sense of humor, but i still laugh at you.
Because your proof that God smokes weed, drinks and takes acid too.
You're a nice guy, but i'll win and i think that it's clear too.
I'd say see ya in hell, but the only place that i'll see ya's my rearview.
If i win i face Fletcher, and i'll make sure that it gets done.
Face it, ya ain't an old president, but you're just a warm up for Nixon.

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classick . johnhensley . mets . shakezula . deon . properhops . armz . username

No doubt, just make sure you vote...

^ ^15 of 16 of those wins ATLEAST SHOWED!! as a matter of fact
I aint know ‘Hens layed ‘goose eggs
………………..Till this bird brain ran in his last championship match
Rodge ripped this recycling coward, why John thinks he-is-bomb?
Showing leagues the same lines, like he want everyone to read his palm
Lost his Ups job to sign in the league thinking dudes in it suck
But ‘Change is a part of this bum’s life
……………….Yeah, that’s all people will put in his cup
I’m Violent so his blood will drip against me, he ain’t winning the title
The way I cramp his style, I will remind him of his menstrual cycle
His slut fucks alotta guys, she can’t get respected, it’s silly
That whore ain’t Sarah Jessica Parker, but she still be sex N the City
And if I gave her binoculars, she still can’t get a number
The ‘Horoscope so many dudes,
…………………..Even Zodiac signs think they can fuck her
Hens think I can’t beat him, but I show up against these queers duke
So I had to show this pussy on-line just like Brittney Spears do
I’ll try to stop insulting Seattle and bringing gays middle fingers
So now I’ll let Jon B(e),
…………………..since his punches are as played as that Singer

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I'll have ya body zipped up if ya begin dissin' these.
And create a T-Bag that'll bring back memories of what ya bitch did to me.
I asked a dude if he knew u, and if ya shit's the wackest.
He said yea i gnome, his skills are a myth and they only reach midget status.
Teflon's a perfect name for you, i mean honestly brother.
Cuz ya spend ya time huggin one guys chest while takin shots from another.
We know u look and act retarded, start believin' that i'm right.
I saw tef yellin '' da da daaaa''.. but he's never hearda Mencia in his life.

vs.

^16 of 17 of those wins ATLEAST SHOWED!! as a matter of fact
I aint know ‘Hens layed ‘goose eggs
………………..Till this bird brain ran in his last championship match
And if I gave her binoculars, she still can’t get a number
The ‘Horoscope so many dudes,
…………………..Even Zodiac signs think they can fuck her

I got John takin this in quotes. I don't like Tefs wordin at all. plus tha punches that I didn't quote from John were still pretty good where as Tefs were either played or weak.

Vote- John Hensley

word, uppin 1-0

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classick . johnhensley . mets . shakezula . deon . properhops . armz . username

I'll have ya body zipped up if ya begin dissin' these.
And create a T-Bag that'll bring back memories of what ya bitch did to me.
I asked a dude if he knew u, and if ya shit's the wackest.
He said yea i gnome, his skills are a myth and they only reach midget status.
If i win i face Fletcher, and i'll make sure that it gets done.
Face it, ya ain't an old president, but you're just a warm up for Nixon.

VS.

^ ^15 of 16 of those wins ATLEAST SHOWED!! as a matter of fact
I aint know ‘Hens layed ‘goose eggs
………………..Till this bird brain ran in his last championship match
And if I gave her binoculars, she still can’t get a number
The ‘Horoscope so many dudes,
…………………..Even Zodiac signs think they can fuck her


Yeah, I gotta give this to Hensley. He dropped a pretty solid verse and TEF had a couple of nice bars, but the wording just let him down overall. The concepts were decent, but its the wording that makes the killer punches and Hensley is basically a master at it, so you gotta come strong to beat him and this time, TEF didn't come hard enough.

V/ - John Hensley.

I'll have ya body zipped up if ya begin dissin' these.
And create a T-Bag that'll bring back memories of what ya bitch did to me.
I asked a dude if he knew u, and if ya shit's the wackest.
He said yea i gnome, his skills are a myth and they only reach midget status.
Teflon's a perfect name for you, i mean honestly brother.
Cuz ya spend ya time huggin one guys chest while takin shots from another.
We know u look and act retarded, start believin' that i'm right.
I saw tef yellin '' da da daaaa''.. but he's never hearda Mencia in his life.

vs.

^16 of 17 of those wins ATLEAST SHOWED!! as a matter of fact
I aint know ‘Hens layed ‘goose eggs
………………..Till this bird brain ran in his last championship match
And if I gave her binoculars, she still can’t get a number
The ‘Horoscope so many dudes,
…………………..Even Zodiac signs think they can fuck her


going with john, he came with a good verse while tef had some iight lines, but his wording was alittle off

v/J-Hens

Some one give me an example of what couda got worded better cause i'm lookin and my rhyme scheme and set ups and I guees I'm not seein what everbody seein as far as the wording. I'm not tyna sway, I Just wanna know Cause everybody sayin the same thing.

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Lost his Ups job to sign in the league thinking dudes in it suck
But ‘Change is a part of this bum’s life
……………….Yeah, that’s all people will put in his cup

I personally would've worded it something like...

Last time he dominated the LBL, now he's gettin blasted up
But change is a part of this bum's life..
.. when he's down in the subway with his plastic cup.

I'll have ya body zipped up if ya begin dissin' these.
And create a T-Bag that'll bring back memories of what ya bitch did to me.
Teflon's a perfect name for you, i mean honestly brother.
Cuz ya spend ya time huggin one guys chest while takin shots from another.
Ya ain't proof God has a sense of humor, but i still laugh at you.
Because your proof that God smokes weed, drinks and takes acid too.
If i win i face Fletcher, and i'll make sure that it gets done.
Face it, ya ain't an old president, but you're just a warm up for Nixon.

vs.

^ ^15 of 16 of those wins ATLEAST SHOWED!! as a matter of fact
I aint know ‘Hens layed ‘goose eggs
………………..Till this bird brain ran in his last championship match


i ono. i feel i may have quoted a few more from TEF if it weren't for wording, even the one i quoted seemed worded a bit awkwardly. hensley took this easy though. the 'gods smokes weed' etc etc line wasn't amazing but made me lmao for some reason. anyway..

v/ john

hensley

Ya girls like a hotel, so no kid ya didnt choose a winner.
Cuz i paid for one night... n' the next fuckin day a new dude was in her.

I asked a dude if he knew u, and if ya shit's the wackest.
He said yea i gnome, his skills are a myth and they only reach midget status.
Teflon's a perfect name for you, i mean honestly brother.
Cuz ya spend ya time huggin one guys chest while takin shots from another.

If i win i face Fletcher, and i'll make sure that it gets done.
Face it, ya ain't an old president, but you're just a warm up for Nixon.

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TEF

^ ^15 of 16 of those wins ATLEAST SHOWED!! as a matter of fact
I aint know ‘Hens layed ‘goose eggs
………………..Till this bird brain ran in his last championship match
Rodge ripped this recycling coward, why John thinks he-is-bomb?
Showing leagues the same lines, like he want everyone to read his palm

tef came aight his wording was off, he started good tho...but hensley verse was pretty funny the hotel and nixon line was funny...good verse..tef you had some cool concepts juss work on wording

vote-hens

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