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Old 12-14-03, 03:38 AM   #1
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yet another

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"a girl i knew"


short verse


leave feedback..........


thanks and pz....................


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Old 12-15-03, 12:41 AM   #2
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noone...........damn.......................


well uppin for feedback...........................
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Old 01-03-04, 01:03 AM   #3
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the lyrics was hott, the vocals were a lil low, i liked this flow was there on topic, a lil sad in my opinion, but overall it was tight keep up the good work, and one more thing, is this a true story?

maybe we can collab sometime
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Old 01-05-04, 01:41 PM   #4
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shits dope patna

atmosphere beat right?

ya quality could do with some upping, the beat is mad low and shit. ^the guy above who said ya vocals were to low is fuckin crazy or has hearing problems lol.

ignoring the quality etc this is ill, especially lyrically, dope shit homey
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Old 01-05-04, 02:35 PM   #5
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voice is trash.........u fell of beat sometimes.....nice story and flow about it......lallalalal nice topic.........lol dossy doo.........u got loud sometimes need to work on quality.....

overall 7/10 nice shit

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