Battle Rules:

10-20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-29-06 at 04:55 PM

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Euthanize. has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-06 01:02 AM.

Kirk has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-06 03:12 AM.

u talk a lot of shit, but i'm bout to beat u badly
.. shots have ya head rockin' - sorta like ya avy.
raw like a cavity. i'm a boss, this tha sequel
now Kirk like Franklin - searchin' for Gods people.
i'm to evil, so after this i'm leaving u for the dead
your coffin? - I .Burn it Down. like your signature says.
and ur fucking stupid, thinking it's okay for some1 to bite
that person is as worthless, as your 3,500+ posts at this site.
I'm Rated-R like a movie .. look it^ and u can find it
.......... ur just PG rated, like Kirk Hinrich.



blah, easy 10.

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u talk a lot of shit, but i'm bout to beat u badly
.. shots have ya head rockin' - sorta like ya avy.
raw like a cavity. i'm a boss, this tha sequel
now Kirk like Franklin - searchin' for Gods people.
i'm to evil, so after this i'm leaving u for the dead
your coffin? - I .Burn it Down. like your signature says.
and ur fucking stupid, thinking it's okay for some1 to bite
that person is as worthless, as your 3,500+ posts at this site.
I'm Rated-R like a movie .. look it^ and u can find it
.......... ur just PG rated, like Kirk Hinrich.

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Meh, don't feel like battling anymore but oh well.

When I'm done with you I'll rip kin, It'll be farewell,
Oriole B-More predictable................... And just C A L,
Callin' me Capitan Kirk... Well, man... Bring on the fights,
Cause when I Trek on ya face, how the fuck you gonna klingon to life?
You better go 20 cause you'll need it... I'm tight with pens,
And theres no u in victory... But there sure is an I in win,
Whats the definition of an addict? People say I match it well,
Only because I drop E... Right after I pass the L,
Bitch, your name explains my verse... Stupid, I'm serious,
Cause I'll beat the fucking shit out of Euthanize... PERIOD.

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Voted For: Kirk

Kirk:

Man, dope drop from you. I liked how you flipped the Cal Ripken line, even though the concept is played, your wording was clever and original, which made it non-gay. Star Trek line made me giggle like a school girl, but then I stopped. Everything else was decent, but nothing special.

Euthanize:

Aright man, let me just tell you right now, your verse was weak. All your punches were poorly worded, and nothing really connected or hit hard at all. You attempted to add personals, but they were all gay and didn't hit him at all. Just work on wording your punches and personals, and you should do better next time.

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Voted For: Kirk

Kirk:
When I'm done with you I'll rip kin, It'll be farewell,
Oriole B-More predictable................... And just C A L,
4/10 - Decent.
Callin' me Capitan Kirk... Well, man... Bring on the fights,
Cause when I Trek on ya face, how the fuck you gonna klingon to life?
3/10 - MEH.
You better go 20 cause you'll need it... I'm tight with pens,
And theres no u in victory... But there sure is an I in win,
5/10 - Niice.
Whats the definition of an addict? People say I match it well,
Only because I drop E... Right after I pass the L,
8/10 - DOPE.
Bitch, your name explains my verse... Stupid, I'm serious,
Cause I'll beat the fucking shit out of Euthanize... PERIOD.
4/10 - Decent.
24/50

Euthanize.:
u talk a lot of shit, but i'm bout to beat u badly
.. shots have ya head rockin' - sorta like ya avy.
5/10 - Good Opener.
raw like a cavity. i'm a boss, this tha sequel
now Kirk like Franklin - searchin' for Gods people.
2/10 - Nah.
i'm to evil, so after this i'm leaving u for the dead
your coffin? - I .Burn it Down. like your signature says.
4/10 - Decent.
and ur fucking stupid, thinking it's okay for some1 to bite
that person is as worthless, as your 3,500+ posts at this site.
4/10 - Decent.
I'm Rated-R like a movie .. look it^ and u can find it
.......... ur just PG rated, like Kirk Hinrich.
2/10 - Hmm....
17/50

OVERALL: This was a pretty good battle, both Emcee's came with some hard punchlines and a pretty solid flow. I give my vote to Kirk though because he had some niice ass punches in there, dope wordplay as well. E your verse had some good punches as well as personals, I just felt Kirk came harder there with a couple of them lines.

Vote - Kirk

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Voted For: Kirk

Kirk wins hands down and up. You just didn't cut it Euthanize. Didn't cut it at all.

Voted For: Kirk

u talk a lot of shit, but i'm bout to beat u badly
.. shots have ya head rockin' - sorta like ya avy.
this was weak man, concept is played to fuck to..
raw like a cavity. i'm a boss, this tha sequel
now Kirk like Franklin - searchin' for Gods people.
again, this was weak... too basic..
i'm to evil, so after this i'm leaving u for the dead
your coffin? - I .Burn it Down. like your signature says.
the concept was cool... but you didn't execute the hard punch with it..
and ur fucking stupid, thinking it's okay for some1 to bite
that person is as worthless, as your 3,500+ posts at this site.
this was just gay..NO..
I'm Rated-R like a movie .. look it^ and u can find it
.......... ur just PG rated, like Kirk Hinrich.
choppy.. and weak..


VS.


When I'm done with you I'll rip kin, It'll be farewell,
Oriole B-More predictable................... And just C A L,
played yo... fuck the L lines..
Callin' me Capitan Kirk... Well, man... Bring on the fights,
Cause when I Trek on ya face, how the fuck you gonna klingon to life?
lmao, dope way to use ure own name... wordplay was nice..
You better go 20 cause you'll need it... I'm tight with pens,
And theres no u in victory... But there sure is an I in win,
this was corny.. but ok..
Whats the definition of an addict? People say I match it well,
Only because I drop E... Right after I pass the L,
fuck, another L line...
Bitch, your name explains my verse... Stupid, I'm serious,
Cause I'll beat the fucking shit out of Euthanize... PERIOD.
nice, although I used this concept on Mimesis before..


Word, this was one-sided to fuck. Euth, I seen you drop way better and your verse was just complete ass. It was basic as hell in most parts, the wording wasn't the best and overall it just lacked any sense of creativity. The only bar where you had a decent concept, you completely fucked it up by just dropping some basic generic ass shit with it.
Kirk, man... I almost didn't vote for you for dropping TWO "L" LINES. What the fuck!! LMAO!! Anyway.. the star trek bar was your best... it was a nice, creative way of using your own name against Euth. I liked the no U in victory bar.. that was cool, although worded a little sloppy. And the closer was nice, I used the concept myself before. It was a cool way to finish off a verse I know you didn't really try on.


V/ - Kirk


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^Word, hit that shit... and I'll see you on the Enterprise.

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