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Old 08-28-04, 05:23 AM   #1
WillNova
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Nova in the sky

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three points a triangle, so sacred//
two triangles caress, the star of David//
Nova agmounst the matrix, shine so brite//
expressed in light, shines divine at nite//
the holy type, still writes and fondles mics//
stellar sight, untouchable, skyline heights//
off in flight, but only land momentarily//
cemetary, now i'm back in the air n breeze//
spirit free wit verity, off in space again//
briter and wiser where the atmosphere ends//
fire within, to be me it takes patient//
waitin, no stipulation fo constellations//
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Old 08-31-04, 06:28 PM   #2
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nice poem, kind of short, but i guess its ok, i know this has meaning to you, which is nice, but i feel it was kind of vague, but still nice piece and keep it up, it had a nice flow to it as well
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Old 08-31-04, 11:40 PM   #3
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need ot extend that shit cuz...but it was dope...nice dawg.
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Old 09-01-04, 12:03 AM   #4
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short but pretty good
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