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Old 02-28-04, 02:58 PM   #1
Razer
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- London Underground -

IP: 22ED 1BB0

To the world, are rappers are just another sound,
Swept Underground, Like We're Just Outta Bound,
We just wanna rap with a different accent in a new way,
Make A Shitload of money, And represent the UK,
Music is our life, just give us an opportunity,
And we'll create a place full of wealth and rap unity,
Ive studied rap for years and thats a well known fact,
But What the fuck am i to do, with no major contract?

Pe@ce
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Old 02-28-04, 04:06 PM   #2
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dis was pretty week.......its was to short....flow was nice...wordplay was basic.....structure was basic...keep it up.....4/10
make it longer
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Old 02-28-04, 04:35 PM   #3
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Originally Posted by Razer
To the world, are rappers are just another sound,
Swept Underground, Like We're Just Outta Bound,
We just wanna rap with a different accent in a new way,
Make A Shitload of money, And represent the UK,
Music is our life, just give us an opportunity,
And we'll create a place full of wealth and rap unity,
Ive studied rap for years and thats a well known fact,
But What the fuck am i to do, with no major contract?

Pe@ce



ITS COOL. BESIDES A FEW TYPING ERRORS AND A BASIC RHYME SCHEME, I FEEL IT. KEEP WRITING. 5/10.

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