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Old 09-11-05, 04:25 PM   #1
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Old 09-12-05, 04:02 AM   #2
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holy shit that intro is too loud mang. lol. and how the hell do you get the links to your songs? With that new player, I am officially retarded. Anyways - ya beat... intro (after that dolby digital style thing) is hella long. This track ain't bacd man. I like the claps, and the under lying snare is nice. The hat sounds hella fruity loopish, as do the synths, but this could get merked the fark out. I'd say work on some more mixups and a few more sounds in this and you're good. RTF mang. word.

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Old 09-12-05, 09:08 PM   #3
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intro dope, space type shit. I like he drums, you got the instrument w/e it is goin well with em. Aiight, I thought that was just to start off, you need more filling in your beats, it sounds quite empty, try adding some strings, or bass, like, deep and low in the background, or some high piano/harpsichord type thing.

Not sure what im getting at, but i think you need more content in the main area of the beat. Pretty dope though.
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