I made mistakes and learned, now I'm smarter than you
Harder than you, Jerzeys tha heart of his crew
Nigga picture this, and glance at it clearly
My flows gangsta, niggaz piss they pants when they hear me
I'm all business, you don't wanna dismiss, tha shit that I mention
Don't speak tha name unless you tryin to get my attention
I always in tha gutter, keep tha hood as a venue
I'll eat chu and ya crew, if there's nuthin good on tha menu
I can write a book on tha streets, or else get in tha drop wit me
Ain't no stoppin me, nigga I know that chu watchin me
Rap is cruel, So you know I gotta pack a tool
For niggaz that wanna get Ludacris and act a fool
I move thru tha hood in a six, I'm good in tha bricks
Fuck around and lose a body part that couldn't be fixed
You shouldn't remix, songs if you can't rap at all
You shouldn't talk gangsta if you don't clap at all
Cuz I won't spank ya, I'll clap at yall, macs n all
We g'd up from toes to head, hit foes wit lead
Make sho that you and ya bros is dead, so my pocket grows wit bread
Cuz once tha plan is composed, case closed I'm fed
Street knowledge enclosed in head, Nah I don't rep a crew
But tha burners in hand, one on my man, when I step to you
No one gives a fuck if we slept on you, stepped on you
Stepped on who??
Don't nobody recognize ya name, we ain't even hearda you
Your name won't burn in tha streets until we murda you

Feedback...

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~Jerzey~
As I'm Blessed with
Tha best gift

~One~

Holla at cha boi

Soundz like u know the streetz son,imma give it to ya cuz some of these ppl dont have a clue wat it's like outside thier lil homes, that shit was some gangsta nigga

yeah man, i don't know about all that gangster crap.

yeah fella, thas whut i'm talkin bout, this nigga got that fire, yea thas streets for ya dog keep this shit up, but let me warn ya, don't do alot of battlin cus i know ya hot when ya writin but niggas on here disrespect ya in battles most of the time, so don't be surprised but its only a few outta the bunch on here who know whut real shit is, man so keep that in mind, i write pretty good too, look at my fucken record? yeah so keep spittin my nigga, pacaso, mfl

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Pacaso mac the Baskin Robbins Street(hustla tryin to scoop up this ice and cream)

shut up freeman it was alright....
if dood thinks hes gangsta let him think so......
good peice here...nice meta's and flow....
little imagry....some wordplay in there....
freeman just hates.......herb
nice tho keep at it....
peace

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i agree wit young blaq, but at da same time freeman makes me wonder, if u aint gangsta dont say you are, but tha flows pretty sick, keep it up

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wussup ey

LMAO.

That was so heart felt, it was just amazing!




...and I don't respect Gangsters.

Aight I'ma try to get sum of this shyt straightened out...aight i don't even have a computer...i come on tha net when i go to my niggaz crib...i'm tryna to get seen dawg...sry if i'm doin my damn thang on tha i-net...and my thang isn't to be usin big words and shyt that isn't in my vocabulary that 3/4 of tha muthafuckas do on here...just ain't my thang...i respect yall for doin that...thas yall...but last time i checked i seen this shit as a way of gettin shit off ya chest and just speakin ya mind...this is wut is on it...so don't judge me cuz u ain't in my shoes

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~Jerzey~
As I'm Blessed with
Tha best gift

~One~

Holla at cha boi