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08-25-04, 03:01 AM | #1 | |||||||
~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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"No Show" post feedback, this is a hot song!
IP: 5043 32F4
My flames would be the same when I rip you up with my huge arms/
Ill be the one not you to break the alarms cuz I got all the charms/. Now listen I could win the ladies over you and you remind me of a jew/ You say yer new no excuse your one of the few goin down cuz you got no clue/. That im young and one of the few who will be kickin you in/ My boi went to find you were you been?/. Don’t say shit because you aint got muscle to backup your mouth/ Cuz you aint from the south nether am I but who you ask/. Ill be the one to sneak up from behind with a mask/ Im gonna tap on yer shoulder you turn around I hit you, its only a task/. You came finally where you been I asked myself/ Why don’t you just drop dead cuz you remind me of a elf/. That makes me eager to wanna take you outside/ You eat to much that’s the reason why your wide/. Come here try and sctatch my ride/ If you did that I would be forced to punch you in, so you better hide/. Cuz I could cut you down with my hit so stop thinking yer the shit/ You don’t even fit into your own briefs so you better quit/. Before some or maybe even me is forced to walk all over you/ Cuz you don’t even belong in this crew, people who agree only a few/. |
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08-25-04, 03:02 AM | #2 | |||||
{: DOPE \>:}
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IP: 97C4 5CAB
gd stuff brutha para 8/10
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08-25-04, 03:08 AM | #3 | |||||||
~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP: 5043 32F4
yo thanks man realy that honest?
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08-25-04, 03:32 AM | #4 | |||||||
~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP: 5043 32F4
U P P I N
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08-25-04, 03:50 AM | #5 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 28AD 5545
yo dat was tite man i liked it shit was raw!
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08-25-04, 04:46 AM | #6 | |||
Klassic
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IP: 6CF5 20BB
some tight shit man, i liked it.
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08-25-04, 04:56 AM | #7 | ||||
Straight From Da Lab!
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IP: 7189 3E18
shit ur shit is nice that is tight 8/10 keep it up G you need to work a bit on the structure, but the rest was ill
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08-25-04, 05:12 AM | #8 | ||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 28AD 5545
fuck structure i liked the entire rap
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08-25-04, 05:21 AM | #9 | |||||||
~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP: 5043 32F4
holy shit then u'll like my other song i made 32 lines im saving it for a topicial tho in the future
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08-25-04, 05:22 AM | #10 | |||||||
~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP: 5043 32F4
ya U P P I N
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08-25-04, 01:27 PM | #11 | |||||||
~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP: 5043 32F4
uppin come on people
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08-25-04, 08:18 PM | #12 | |||||||
~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP: 5043 32F4
well im uppin hello?
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