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Old 01-19-05, 02:43 PM   #1
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N*gga Its Over: Kingz & Triple_N

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This is the soon to be entrance music for the Trojan Freefighters

Intro: Triple N
1st Verse: Kingz
2nd Verse: Triple N
3rd Verse: Kingz

Beat: Rock It

Triple N ripped this song up. I'd tried to spit gully so i wudnt change the tempo. What ya'll think? I can always re-record lol

Kingz & Triple_N: N*gga Its Over

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Old 01-19-05, 02:52 PM   #2
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ok kingz wasnt feeling your verses or the hook triple ns verse wasnt special either and the beat was madd boring i heard some fire from both of you but this wasnt it should be done on a better beat maybe to liven it up
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Old 01-19-05, 02:55 PM   #3
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ok thx man i'll look into that

i'll pm u with the link for my verse in our collab wit NOS 2moro cos im gunna re-record that too
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Old 01-19-05, 09:14 PM   #4
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yo this was nice track. I liked the hook nice shit. both y'all came nice in yo verses. I don't kno, about how Kingz spat, his voice and ish. I think when you spit normally it's doper. but it was still good. Nice lyrics and flow. tight shit, pc
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Old 01-20-05, 12:22 AM   #5
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well i was feeling this........its nice...quality is nice

kiingz...its like your forcing that style...i dontthink this is acuatlly your style....
nice lyrics....some shit you said didnt really rhyme.....you fialed to make this song YOUR song...you didnt add your own unique shit to it,,,

tipleN....this was your song....you made this song what it is....i like the chorus it was kinda catchy...tommorow im gionna be singing your chorus...lol its already stuck in my head....your verse was dope...i would hate to say it was a lil better than kingz...

kingz..if oyu would like to re record this osng it would be nice..so try to do that then post it back in here...so we can leave more feedback...

all in all..nice quality..i could hear everyword...
one of the best songs ive heard in awhile..this should be a featured song....
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Old 01-20-05, 01:00 AM   #6
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ehh...

song was a ight...like cal said...its kinda borin...the beat isnt really fittin good...

kingz...ya flow...is kinda choppy...along wit pronounciation...i heard some aight lines up in here tho...if u fix the flow...and the beat...like get a beat that is more hype...then it might be somethin to fuck wit...

Triple...this was aight...wasnt nuthin really that special tho...flow was good tho...it didnt fall off at one point tho...i peeped that..lol...emotion is fine..the chorus...coulda been betta tho...wasnt really feelin that...

overall...it was an ok track..but i msure it could be hella betta...
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Old 01-20-05, 02:47 AM   #7
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listenin...
voice is real hott
hook is nice
flow and delivery are on point
lyrics are also aight on this
overall a pretty dope track
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Old 01-20-05, 05:30 PM   #8
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Old 01-20-05, 06:43 PM   #9
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*listening*...damn triple, sounds mean...lol...first verse was dope,kingz i think you got a lot better then you were..you were feelin yourself....nice....i like the hook actually...triple.i like ya flow on this, and both had good lyrics...production sounds good too, like the beat a lot..ok 3rd verse, kingz,you coulda been louder to further compensate with triples gulliness..lol, but you guys sound dope together..definitaly a tight track...stay up.1
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Old 01-20-05, 11:58 PM   #10
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damn this one is dope Kingz you really came good here one of the best from you speically with the combo with triple N yall came tight...both your styles go good together for this beat...but you coulda made it so i coulda downloaded it i would of put it on a CD...damn...but yea yall emotion was good and came out very good it was very clear n everything i was real feeling this one...one of the best fron Kingz and almost one of the best for Triple...just a good combo on it...DOPE shit here...1

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Old 01-21-05, 12:21 AM   #11
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This is a nice track...lovin the hook...nice verses from both...very nice quality...nice flow from both, nice shit...keep it up, peep my latest track...thanks...

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Old 01-21-05, 05:19 AM   #12
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pretty good. nothin special here but i prefer this over a lot of other mainstream music. its a bit too generic for my likeing but nothing wrong with it thats just my personal taste. you both had good flow you both got tight vocals like i said lyrics not really my thing but good. beat was alright aswell. rtf in 'drops in the ocean'.
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GULLY MUTHAFUCKAZ .....good shit here men good beat kings fell off a lil bit but overall nice track DROP some feed on hiphop by thirdself feat calamity!holla

come on fam, i know u can leave more feedback than that cuzzo
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Old 01-21-05, 09:22 PM   #14
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beat is lack luster... kingz your matchin the intensity of the beat, but the beat aint intense enough for fightin music- Hook is best part of the track- Triple had nice verse as well... I just really think you guys chose the wrong beat for the track- as far as spittin though I found it on par from what I'd expect to hear from you two- - keep doin it...1
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i was feeling the beat but the emotion for it was ehh... kingz you fell off a lil' bit, but i like the chorus.. and Triple did good too.. nice lyrics i have heard some better tracks from you two.. but this wasn't bad just not y'all best.. y'all shoulda picked a beat with heavy bass.. but stay up, kiddies..
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