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04-19-05, 12:05 AM | #1 | ||||||
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Is this why we love rap music?(please dont read!!!)
IP: 5285 DC82
This is just a quck peice I wrote.
Just a drop about someone breaking intot he rap industry in two double owe 5 Hate it or love it.... couldnt give two fucks! ~~~~~
nutured by the music,seldom in your expression and voice allways willing to be suddle,mastered your craft of choice using it for a hobbie,strickly for your own desire never afraid to test you ability,maximum lyrics down to the wire being in control of how others view your expression say what you want to who you want,no advise of discression pleasure rather than pain,wrtiting music is listed in your resume's money isnt why you do it,simply to be expressing your views of these days saturated by downpours or alcoholic beverages makes more fun than desired still young,wise,loving the music,cant ever understand why others retired ~~~~~ learnt that cool edit can elevate your creativity,teach about production mixtaped minds,suffixed datelines and his hate reclines like induction grow a hunger for beats like a fiend for some crack learnt that you have a talent after you hear yourself on a track joke and laugh about making it big one day in the game from this moment on your life will never be the same ~~~~ Daily work ethic starts to evolve,gotta start from the bottom to reach the top your peers cant understand why you daily preach hip hop everything in your day is an influence to a line in your rhyme book quick resolution and relisation on how much wasted time crime took never got you anywere,its your artform that will bring you closer as you fuck wid cool edit,you relise you need to get some exposure But money is vital in this desire you now have to circumnavigate your interest gotta use your time wise ,tracks have to be perfect for a record company to invest laying down track after track,but quality isnt as good as you wish money is a nessecity,but you need to buy your next dish saving your cash for the next step in equipment But its made by an overseas company,so the price is double for shipment ~~~~ heart racing,you need to find a set that reclines feeling like your bout to blow like honda that redlines mangaer just told you the news,your first song to reach the charts overwellemd with joy,failng to relise that this is were the drama starts your sitting comfortably at number twelve,just above someone nameless to you belif isnt there,suprised that your actually the most famous in crew your ego starts to rise,despise your critics you feel un-deniably great you start to plot ideas,unaware you label has decided your fate they tell you to make a song,give you the topic the beat saying "you need airtime" ..you turn your back walk away....damn this is no longer the rap i done in my spare time!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Would of made it longer and more indepth, but rapverse has alot of lazy fucks on it who cant be fucked reading some dope real shit. So yeh,say what the fuck you want Im proberly not gonna take any of it into consideration. Last edited by Fi-Del : 04-19-05 at 12:08 AM. |
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04-19-05, 01:32 PM | #2 | ||||||
Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
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04-19-05, 06:42 PM | #3 | ||||
Light Weight
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IP: 342A DA98
Well, personally I liked this one.. I could give you a few pointers but since you dont want anyones advice id just shut my trap..
Well, overall.. 7/10 Keep this shit comin.. Sweft
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04-20-05, 08:26 AM | #4 | ||||||
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04-20-05, 04:07 PM | #5 | ||||||
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04-21-05, 03:37 AM | #6 | ||||||
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04-23-05, 08:32 AM | #7 | ||||||
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04-23-05, 11:28 AM | #8 | ||||
leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: 0CC4 EFEF
nice drop fam, was feelin a couple bars
that were perdy nice.......tc reppin......... . . stay up fam
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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04-23-05, 06:16 PM | #9 | |||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 5285 DC82
yeh you know Tc stay holding it down.
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