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Old 08-12-09, 03:22 PM   #1
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Instrumental. Alleyway Opera

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Made this in Reason 4.0 if anybody would like to collaborate on the beat let me know. I will send you the .RSN file and you can edit it up as you like.


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Old 08-12-09, 06:23 PM   #2
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pretty dope instramental no hate
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Old 08-12-09, 07:30 PM   #3
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good shit, drums could do with some EQing and reverb to make them sound 'fuller' and some other sounds could do with some tweaking so they dont sound so 'factory' but its pretty cool bro.
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Old 08-13-09, 05:31 AM   #4
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Thanks appreciate the feedback guys. I will work on it some more I'm thinking some low volume scratches would sound good mixed in there and I might use a different drum for the hook to switch it up. I'd like to see how you guys interpret my beat into your own musical talent so let's hear some raps. More beats to come I just wiped off my keyboard after a long musical road block but I found some inspiration finally.
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Old 08-13-09, 08:32 PM   #5
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i fuck wit reason 4.0. not a bad beat, lovin the snare, but thats about all im lovin. and maybe the sequencing. Good mixups, but some of ur notes sound off, and not diggin the mix of instruments. keep'at'er.
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Old 08-13-09, 11:21 PM   #6
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wunna send me the drum track
cuz thats really all i was feeling
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Mmmm, dont like the melody at all, the drums arent that bad, you still need alot of practice but dont quit!
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Old 08-16-09, 02:38 PM   #8
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Jay send me an email and I'll reply with the drum track, and Phenom you too if you'd like to. And if any of you guys could teach me how to get better/what to do different/any tricks that would be appreciated. We could get on MSN and discuss it sometime.

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