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Old 12-26-03, 10:50 AM   #1
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A.P. Presents: D.o.T. & Setz - Cream (Freeverse)

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Yea... You know tha deal...

1st - D.o.T.

2nd - Setz

Hook - Meth lol...

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holla at cha nukkaz...

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Old 12-26-03, 12:58 PM   #2
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Ahhhhhh at the beat, classic ..

First guy .. "George in the jungle" .. hahaha .. dope. Alchohol line was nice too .. good flow, a little slow for me really but it was nice .. second guy was decent too .. "flames from the chamber" .. ahh .. i liked that .. pretty cool collab .. the second guy can't siong the hook though >=)

Haha .. cool track man.
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Old 12-26-03, 01:09 PM   #3
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this was good for a freeverse....if it was more organized into a song track, this would probably be a better track you feel me, but that'll be up to ya to redue this and make it into an official track.....first cat flowed crispy with the beat...."but the tallest one around is the last man standing"...feelin that bar right there...

second cat sounds to lazy on his flow....and you go off beat sumtimes, but then you catch it.....you sound like you have no emotion...scream if you have too, lol....well anyway, this was good....keep doin what ya do....UnOz




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Old 12-27-03, 05:34 PM   #4
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Wooooooord, the beat is ill of course.

D.o.T - flow was fluid, voice seemed a little low, but still dope. lyrics were dope. lol@ george in the jungle. dope verse, liked it.

Setz - flow was cool, lyrics were aiight. voice was cool. liked the flames from the chamber also, pretty dope.

nice collab.
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Old 12-29-03, 02:01 PM   #5
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thanx uppin...
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Old 12-29-03, 11:47 PM   #6
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beat is classic.. like said. quality is bad. bring those vocals up. mic is bad. lyrics coo. flow is off and on.

second guy like his voice. i think yall rappin to monotone. variate ya voice so we dont get bored. yea.. so keep at it and elevate.
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