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Old 10-01-07, 07:21 PM   #1
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Is It Really Worth It

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if you got robbed n left shirtless on purpose and you mad as shit
then whyle out and kill a child on accident
ask yourself........., is it really worth it
cuz you feel emabarrassed you wanna commit murder?

or what about ya baby mama slap you n scratch you all up
you leave to keep from beatin her, she call police up
the whole time you outside just workin on ya truck
then dem boys come thru and they lock ya ass up
tha whole time you the one wit tha bruises and the cuts
and ya baby mama earned her name as tha neighborhood slut
i wonder................, was it really worth it
you could've knocked her ass out you don't deserve this

or tell me how tha fuck i can't get a damn promotion at my job
cuz they know about my younger days when i used to rob
but i'm fully qualifed for the position that i want
filled my quotas but my dike ass boss tryna front
then they hire a new girl and have me train the rookie
and she get the promotion just because she eat pussy
damn! man!..........., is it really worth it
i could've stayed on tha block and been more of a person

instead i been perpin, frontin like the 9 to 5 .....
made me who i am when it's really my life n grind
which built me tough n shrewd n able to conduct my bizness
standin firm never flinchin knowin that i witness
lifetimes beyond tha norm
for tha honey i wasted money blind runnin thru tha swarms.....

of wants over my needs, lust over tha love
give under receive, my fam under tha club
bein up for awards mad at gettin snubbed
breakin bottles on heads such an immature thug

now with all that said and done
it was worth it cuz i still got air in my lungs
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Old 10-02-07, 03:03 AM   #2
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very very simplistic boring read, I mean...you did grab me for about 6 lines before I lost complete interest in the whole entire piece but from what I read, you could definitely expand your vocabulary which would help when making OM's that touch on deep issues such as domestic abuse, but when you hear about it over and over, it's just...best that you try to be more creative, cuz you got to put yourself in the critics shoes. This person is seeing topics like this by the dozens.
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Old 10-02-07, 09:34 AM   #3
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are you bein for real??? i was speakin from real life experiences sharin them and if you haven't gone thru any of that i wouldn't expect you to understand i wasn't tryna be complex so why would i use big words, expand your mind and open your eyes playboy why would you even respond if you aint feel the same way, if you couldn't relate it wasn't meant for you so keep you judgements to yourself thanks
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Old 10-02-07, 12:15 PM   #4
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Yo Skaal, nice drop. This reminded me alot of Canibus' "Nigganometry" track, were you basing it on that? It seemed like you kind of forgot about the "Was it worth it?" pattern towards the end tho. Liked it anyway tho.

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Old 10-02-07, 02:11 PM   #5
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are you bein for real??? i was speakin from real life experiences sharin them and if you haven't gone thru any of that i wouldn't expect you to understand i wasn't tryna be complex so why would i use big words, expand your mind and open your eyes playboy why would you even respond if you aint feel the same way, if you couldn't relate it wasn't meant for you so keep you judgements to yourself thanks



are you being real? whether or not your speaking from life experiences doesn't change the fact that It has to look like a 6 yr old wrote it, be creative...and write your shit better If you want people to read through the entire thing without loosing complete interest in the piece, ok? thanks.
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Old 10-11-07, 12:38 PM   #6
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Old 10-14-07, 06:32 AM   #7
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