Jason Has To Die(diss track)
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i left feed on intermental feat implicit and drama queen's work your shit

oh and this song is incomplete, i just never finished it so

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come on i always leave feed and no one and replying you fucking assholes

beats decent..

cool intro

cool hook,

nice effects on the vocals...am feelin the mixing and background effects

lunch line was nice, flows decent.

Pretty good track, good shit.

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Listening...

Damn...likin this beat so far...

Intro sets the topic that I was guessin...

Is that the hook in the beginning..?

Pretty decent flow...haha some funny punches in there...LMFAO at your closer...A pretty nice track...delivery and emotion were lacking a bit I thought...dubs were WAY too loud though I'm afraid.

But overall, good track, keep it up.

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beat is dope..
I know how much you hate this guy..
lol..
im def feelin the intro...

LMAOOOO these lyrics funny
let this boy hear it
flow good

good shit

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thanksss upping on this

Hmm somin i noticed on this, your voice faded in and out really awkwardly, the flow was alright. after you did the first hook there and then layered your verse wit that gurl/normal voice it sounded wierd. the lyrics are actually pretty good. the beat is pretty good too, i can see your coming along way with your audio skills I'm glad you never quited. but anyway props and this is a pretty good song man.

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the beats pretty ill...ya need too work on mixing....the beginning flow is pretty cool...if its the hook its a nice melody with the beat....ya lyrics were decent...not too shabby..ya coulda used a bit more emotion in it....but ya switch ups were good...this is an other track that i can say u gettin better on...overrall not too bad fam.....nice diss track...keep um coming

overall-7.3/10

Return the fav.- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211670

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My Music HOE

LMAo yo nice lyriks

the beat was koo but i herd better from you

this was a koo piece u served da kat,everything was on point!nice effects!shyt once again another dope drop!hey RTF in ma ( from da hood )

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ok listening....beat is good....

damn hook is nice man....good job on that....

your dubs are a lil bit off on a few parts.....

delivery is ok...

the end of the 1st verse...flow falls off a bit...you kinda try n let the beat catch up with you....

ehh wasnt feeling the closing thing..where you kinda sang....


overall...the hook stood out on this track...props on that...

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