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Old 03-12-05, 05:03 AM   #1
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Kesse vs One M.B.

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mistaken identity - you've been framed for something, a crime or whatever.. how do you deal with it? what are the course of events etc..

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Old 03-12-05, 05:05 AM   #2
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One M.B. has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-12-05 05:05 AM.
 
Old 03-12-05, 07:14 AM   #3
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[font=franklin gothic medium]

who woulda thought, pulled up by bent cops,
get a set shock when they plant some fresh rocks,
gets the tech cocked, to my head locked,
said 'drop', said they heard me confess, what?
taken to the station, grilled by narcs 'n feds,
fuck, my past is messed, they'll pin my art 'n theft,
say i'ma crim, in 6 years i never even passed a red,
they fast to press, say i'ma go behind bars for ten,
i'm sweatin now, more than before 'n clawin for more,
reasons, implorin to ya'll i didn't unlawfully store,
four key's all in the floor, i spent a night in lockdown,
got dropped, clowned, i'm tired 'n lost now,
after a week in court, it's up to the jury to judge me,
fury succumbs me, keep cool as i stew in the front seat,
deliver the verdict, it hit me, my heart was dire,
said i had to be guilty, 'cos cops can't be liers...

4 years later, they realise i stated the right facts,
released from prison, but i can't have my life back,
try 'n return to normal, but the bars've changed me,
i'm dark 'n shady, others say it's hard to face me,
it ruined my life, them cops pressin the drug shit,
fuck crime an punishment, i question the ethics of justice..
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Kesse has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-12-05 12:08 PM.
 
Old 03-12-05, 01:07 PM   #5
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my life use to be normal, i was once fully sane
but now im on the edge of breaking down, always in pain
i worked at a department store, respected and well paid
had a family which i cared for, every night i would pray
but the upcoming events, i never thought they were true
i was forever exiled, and by the law i was pursued
accused of a crime, that i would never dream to commit
i thought this, but maybe i just couldn't come to admit
and explanation had to be found, for all of these events
i lived an honest life, everything i thought was content
but that didn't change the fact that im now a criminal
and the chance of me escaping this was at a low minimal
the true suspect remains at large, still roaming the street
but officials rule against me, my only option now is defeat
and as i stand before the judge, my innocent life on trial
this is such a joke, but my depressed state can't crack a smile
murdering a mother and her 3 children, sentanced for life
if this was true, i would have ended it myself with my own knife
but nothing can be done, sent away forever, no chance of parole
now i belong to this prision, for reasons beyond my control
i hope my family will remember me, and the love i had given
stuck in another mans fate, but still hope to be forgiven
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Old 03-12-05, 07:08 PM   #6
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lol @ my noobness... i forgot the [/font]...
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Old 03-12-05, 07:12 PM   #7
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hahaha, yeah, i was laughin at that this morning, for some reason....been a while eh.....haha
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Old 03-12-05, 07:24 PM   #8
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Voted For: One M.B.

i think OMB took this one. this was a close on tho.
omb-yo verse was more interesting, and you hit it hard from tha beginning, and stayed consistent. i liked your multies thruout tha whole flow, and i was feelin yo mettas. i think yo structure was a lil off tho. i wasnt too much feelin that, but other than that, i feel you got my vote.
kesse-yo verse was clean also. i was feelin yo structure, and your wordplay, but i feel you lacked feelings in yo verse. yo verse was not interesting at all to me. thats why i couldnt give u tha win, plus, i just wasnt feelin tha way you went about the topic. but other than that, i would say you had a good drop, but not good enough to take tha win!
overall-OMB and kesse, this was a good battle, but kesse, if you wouldve put more into yo verse, you wouldve made it real hard for me to chose....

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Old 03-12-05, 11:45 PM   #9
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woah woah...

i nominate, best T battle of Feb/March right here...
lets brake it down.

kesse:

this was battle proves you have mad potential. you came ill with it. wrote a picture perfect scene, had the imagery on lock, killed it with flow. did your thing and made it look easy, i loved the visual it gave me, you pulled through pretty well here.

but....

OMB:

was one with the flow, had consistant and solid punches. did the verb scheme thing, and had the whole verse under ya thumb, you tackled this T. had just what it takes for the W. the only part that seperated your verse from kesses was the multis going, loved that style like it was cholate syrup on a strawberry.

* both verse = dope

i wanna see another from the two of you

v/ OMB

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Old 03-12-05, 11:48 PM   #10
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ahhhhh....OMB, you'll be the death of me........haha, word to feed
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Old 03-13-05, 05:54 PM   #11
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lets get this closed bitches...............................
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Old 03-14-05, 01:35 AM   #12
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Yeah I think that OMB won this battle cause it was doper on so many levels and it was like cool and stuff and it had heaps of stuff in it and i was like wow and stuff u know what i mean? cuz it was pretty cool how he said all that shit about ethics and hjustice and like it had structure and flow and punches and all that cool stuff thats sposed to make battles cool and.........stuff... you know what i mean it was like the most amazing spectacular battle ive ever read and it was pretty ill and stuff.. so he gets my vote cuz it was amazing.. especially when he said these lines..

who woulda thought, pulled up by bent cops,
get a set shock when they plant some fresh rocks,
gets the tech cocked, to my head locked,
said 'drop', said they heard me confess, what?
taken to the station, grilled by narcs 'n feds,
fuck, my past is messed, they'll pin my art 'n theft,
say i'ma crim, in 6 years i never even passed a red,
they fast to press, say i'ma go behind bars for ten,
i'm sweatin now, more than before 'n clawin for more,
reasons, implorin to ya'll i didn't unlawfully store,
four key's all in the floor, i spent a night in lockdown,
got dropped, clowned, i'm tired 'n lost now,
after a week in court, it's up to the jury to judge me,
fury succumbs me, keep cool as i stew in the front seat,
deliver the verdict, it hit me, my heart was dire,
said i had to be guilty, 'cos cops can't be liers...

4 years later, they realise i stated the right facts,
released from prison, but i can't have my life back,
try 'n return to normal, but the bars've changed me,
i'm dark 'n shady, others say it's hard to face me,
it ruined my life, them cops pressin the drug shit,
fuck crime an punishment, i question the ethics of justice..

they were the best lines in his battle.. Kesse only had like.......a few good lines........they were...

and the chance

^Thats about it..

Nah layins?
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Old 03-14-05, 01:37 AM   #13
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Quote:
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Voted For: One M.B.

Yeah I think that OMB won this battle cause it was doper on so many levels and it was like cool and stuff and it had heaps of stuff in it and i was like wow and stuff u know what i mean? cuz it was pretty cool how he said all that shit about ethics and hjustice and like it had structure and flow and punches and all that cool stuff thats sposed to make battles cool and.........stuff... you know what i mean it was like the most amazing spectacular battle ive ever read and it was pretty ill and stuff.. so he gets my vote cuz it was amazing.. especially when he said these lines..

who woulda thought, pulled up by bent cops,
get a set shock when they plant some fresh rocks,
gets the tech cocked, to my head locked,
said 'drop', said they heard me confess, what?
taken to the station, grilled by narcs 'n feds,
fuck, my past is messed, they'll pin my art 'n theft,
say i'ma crim, in 6 years i never even passed a red,
they fast to press, say i'ma go behind bars for ten,
i'm sweatin now, more than before 'n clawin for more,
reasons, implorin to ya'll i didn't unlawfully store,
four key's all in the floor, i spent a night in lockdown,
got dropped, clowned, i'm tired 'n lost now,
after a week in court, it's up to the jury to judge me,
fury succumbs me, keep cool as i stew in the front seat,
deliver the verdict, it hit me, my heart was dire,
said i had to be guilty, 'cos cops can't be liers...

4 years later, they realise i stated the right facts,
released from prison, but i can't have my life back,
try 'n return to normal, but the bars've changed me,
i'm dark 'n shady, others say it's hard to face me,
it ruined my life, them cops pressin the drug shit,
fuck crime an punishment, i question the ethics of justice..

they were the best lines in his battle.. Kesse only had like.......a few good lines........they were...

and the chance

^Thats about it..

Nah layins?


lmao! Fuckin jester-ass fool... -_-
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Old 03-14-05, 01:49 AM   #14
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^ haha, what a bastard....i think its pretty safe to say i hate nos, when he votes
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Old 03-14-05, 01:59 AM   #15
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He needed 5 credits... What a scab... .
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