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Old 09-17-06, 01:11 PM   #1
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19. Tony Brown (0-1) vs 20. So Rell (0-0)

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Old 09-17-06, 09:16 PM   #2
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Match me...

Off the scene for a minute so the comeback, I won't over do.
I owe some ass whoopin... and you bout to be Owin too (0-2).
It's Over dood, Move Joke, you suck so bad you can't get Crew Votes.
This guy Sways so much that MTV made him their New Host.
The Championship is a short road, and damn ngga it's clear as day.
Fuck what you thinkin...wait that might give you Hearin Aides.
"You suck!" Hear Okay? I don't fight fair, so T.O.P. is jumpin doods.
Gonna be so much Foot Action, feels like the whole Staff's stompin you.
Pump this fool, you a tiny lil ngga, you might wanna get weight.
Cause I'm lookin for Drama and it ain't for a Mixtape.
If you forfiet this match bitch, be real, you better speak.
I thought Dog years were fast, Your Ranks gets older every Week...

Hmmm...
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Old 09-18-06, 06:29 PM   #3
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Old 09-21-06, 09:52 PM   #4
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Question number one, what the fuck's wrong wit you, son?
I can't quite put my finger on it....cuz i only have 10 of em
Tunnel vision? Nah dude, when i clap at this wack kid
Ya point of view, simply speakin, would be the back of ya eyelids
This aint even hard, lemme go head n describe this whore
A diamond n the rough<---THATS why he dull n don't shine no more
Dog ya verses is bland, tryin so much yet u always get tore
So here's a helping hand
....................n 5 fingers around that thick neck of yours
Just chill wit the forced concepts, man look how ya structure falls
That shit's more fuckin tilted, than a hardcore game of pinball
Bitch u cry when u lose, so stop claimin u a good sport
Cuz i never heard such a tall tale...from someone so damn short
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Old 09-21-06, 10:19 PM   #5
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just an extra post so ppl know this battle is done
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Old 09-22-06, 12:09 PM   #6
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Old 09-22-06, 02:40 PM   #7
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yea so uhhh, votes??? lol
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Old 09-22-06, 06:12 PM   #8
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Off the scene for a minute so the comeback, I won't over do.
I owe some ass whoopin... and you bout to be Owin too (0-2).
cool wordplay
It's Over dood, Move Joke, you suck so bad you can't get Crew Votes.
This guy Sways so much that MTV made him their New Host.
i saw the dude areal use something like this on anotha.. i doubt you saw it, but this is played to me
The Championship is a short road, and damn ngga it's clear as day.
Fuck what you thinkin...wait that might give you Hearin Aides.
ehh
"You suck!" Hear Okay? I don't fight fair, so T.O.P. is jumpin doods.
Gonna be so much Foot Action, feels like the whole Staff's stompin you.
decent
Pump this fool, you a tiny lil ngga, you might wanna get weight.
Cause I'm lookin for Drama and it ain't for a Mixtape.
no real punch
If you forfiet this match bitch, be real, you better speak.
I thought Dog years were fast, Your Ranks gets older every Week...
hah. nice

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Question number one, what the fuck's wrong wit you, son?
I can't quite put my finger on it....cuz i only have 10 of em
lol.. cool
Tunnel vision? Nah dude, when i clap at this wack kid
Ya point of view, simply speakin, would be the back of ya eyelids
i don't really like the 1 sylabbel rhyming you use.. but not bad
This aint even hard, lemme go head n describe this whore
A diamond n the rough<---THATS why he dull n don't shine no more
i've seen 'diamond in the rough' done better
Dog ya verses is bland, tryin so much yet u always get tore
So here's a helping hand
....................n 5 fingers around that thick neck of yours
decent
Just chill wit the forced concepts, man look how ya structure falls
That shit's more fuckin tilted, than a hardcore game of pinball
meh
Bitch u cry when u lose, so stop claimin u a good sport
Cuz i never heard such a tall tale...from someone so damn short
he's short then..? not bad

i've got this @ -

Off the scene for a minute so the comeback, I won't over do.
I owe some ass whoopin... and you bout to be Owin too (0-2)
If you forfiet this match bitch, be real, you better speak.
I thought Dog years were fast, Your Ranks gets older every Week...

vs.

Question number one, what the fuck's wrong wit you, son?
I can't quite put my finger on it....cuz i only have 10 of em
Tunnel vision? Nah dude, when i clap at this wack kid
Ya point of view, simply speakin, would be the back of ya eyelids
Bitch u cry when u lose, so stop claimin u a good sport
Cuz i never heard such a tall tale...from someone so damn short

v/ TB - on quotables. i felt he was more consistent.. i'd like to see him incorporate multi's into his punches, the 1 sylabell shit isn't really to my liking. so.rell wasn't bad by any means.. i just felt he had a few iffy lines, and the 'sway' ish was played to me.
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Old 09-22-06, 08:26 PM   #9
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Off the scene for a minute so the comeback, I won't over do.
I owe some ass whoopin... and you bout to be Owin too (0-2)
If you forfiet this match bitch, be real, you better speak.
I thought Dog years were fast, Your Ranks gets older every Week...

vs.

Question number one, what the fuck's wrong wit you, son?
I can't quite put my finger on it....cuz i only have 10 of em
Tunnel vision? Nah dude, when i clap at this wack kid
Ya point of view, simply speakin, would be the back of ya eyelids
Bitch u cry when u lose, so stop claimin u a good sport
Cuz i never heard such a tall tale...from someone so damn short

Tony brown take this with a more solid and consistant verse.

v/Tony Brown
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Old 09-22-06, 11:27 PM   #10
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Off the scene for a minute so the comeback, I won't over do.
I owe some ass whoopin... and you bout to be Owin too (0-2).
It's Over dood, Move Joke, you suck so bad you can't get Crew Votes.
This guy Sways so much that MTV made him their New Host.
The Championship is a short road, and damn ngga it's clear as day.
Fuck what you thinkin...wait that might give you Hearin Aides.
"You suck!" Hear Okay? I don't fight fair, so T.O.P. is jumpin doods.
Gonna be so much Foot Action, feels like the whole Staff's stompin you.
Pump this fool, you a tiny lil ngga, you might wanna get weight.
Cause I'm lookin for Drama and it ain't for a Mixtape.

vs.

Tunnel vision? Nah dude, when i clap at this wack kid
Ya point of view, simply speakin, would be the back of ya eyelids

another one sided battle here. So. Rell just came with way more punches and solid wordplay. Tony has a big problem with wording and punches. I was expecting more from him but IMO he didn't deliver in this battle at all.

V/ So. Rell

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Old 09-23-06, 02:26 AM   #11
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Old 09-23-06, 07:25 PM   #12
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Question number one, what the fuck's wrong wit you, son?
I can't quite put my finger on it....cuz i only have 10 of em
Tunnel vision? Nah dude, when i clap at this wack kid
Ya point of view, simply speakin, would be the back of ya eyelids
Bitch u cry when u lose, so stop claimin u a good sport
Cuz i never heard such a tall tale...from someone so damn short

VS


"You suck!" Hear Okay? I don't fight fair, so T.O.P. is jumpin doods.
Gonna be so much Foot Action, feels like the whole Staff's stompin you.

V/TB MORE CONSISTENCY EXPECTED ALOT MORE FROM RELL
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Old 09-24-06, 07:05 AM   #13
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Tony Brown wins 3-1.

Tony Brown wins (1-1)
So Rell loses (0-1)
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