Talkin nonsense because its hard to stay-sober,
It's Point Blank sayin you just a gay-poser,
Pantie's n Bra's everywhere when the days-over,
I Kill ya dead, ya Still inbred so strip and let ya parents-in,
You cant even walk straight and your a fuckin emberrassment,
Meanwhile I'm in a different room wit this Old-Miss,
Open her 'lips' wide and slip in the Whole-Fist,
I can barely breathe feels like my lungs have no oxygen,
Then I wake up The fuckin drunks been throwin Rocks-again,
The end of it all go n get ya weed from the lost-n-found,
Sorry lookin punks seemed to have been Tossed-around,
Carpet be lookn like prehistoric fuckin fossiled-ground,

I was hungover and decided to rap about partying, just a quick drop, id appreciate feedback though,
peace

ok piece for a quick drop.....
flo was a tad choppy....and increase the vocab...

decent concept tho.........

do me a favor an drop ur thoughts on
the monkey dream
thanks and keep postin....pc*1*

thanks for the feedback bro,
ill definetly check out your monkey dream. lol.
peace

some more feedback please