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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Razor 1 16.67%
DirtBoy69 5 83.33%
Voters: 6. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
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Old 03-16-04, 10:13 PM   #1
DirtBoy69
i changed my title !!
 
From: Kincardine Ontario
dirtboy69 vs. Razer

IP: 275E DC37

must eplain your votes!!!
no dick riding votes or crew votes
10 bar max
verses due by tomorrow night
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


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Old 03-16-04, 10:51 PM   #2
DirtBoy69
i changed my title !!
 
From: Kincardine Ontario
IP: 275E DC37

here i did this right away waiting on you:

losing all of your battles quick looking for a crew/
patheic knowing that you need someone to vote for you/
a textcee producing beats? spend more time avoiding defeats/
cause you catching them like a accountant with tax receipts/
i read that topical you posted "e-mails from desperate girls"/
son they were love letters, cross dressers looking for thrills/
take your name sake and lob of some limbs till your blood spills/
a emcee quickly losing ground your empire crumbling beneath/
like the u.k your golry's all in the past gone like your teeth/
cause i've dulled this razor he's harmless nothing to fight with/
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


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Old 03-17-04, 01:51 PM   #3
DirtBoy69
i changed my title !!
 
From: Kincardine Ontario
IP: 275E DC37

hey where are you???? hurry up and show it's not that long of a battle come on it shouldn't take this long to write
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Old 03-17-04, 11:09 PM   #4
DirtBoy69
i changed my title !!
 
From: Kincardine Ontario
IP: 275E DC37

fucking no show you fag where are you??????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????????

still looking for this kid it's time to show hell i'll even give another day
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


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Old 03-18-04, 04:16 AM   #5
Razer
Flyweight
 
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From: South London, UK
IP: 22ED 1BB0

O.K LISTEN UP MOTHER FUCKER......


Gayboy 69, you should of taken your time with your rhyme,
You illiterate fag, spitting lyrics whilst clutching a hand bag,
Everyone here really knowns your a newbie in this game,
Or you never went to school - you cant spell explain!,
I read half of your verse, then it brought me to boredom,
The worst piece of text ive ever seen on this forum,
We all want money, but you're too desperate for wealth,
I mean, what kind of fag tries to vote for himself?,
Youve basically faded out, just like your avatar,
At at the end of the day, you're just an amature!,

...Right im done.
Pe@ce
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Razer Vs Dagreatest

Text Record:
Will A Peer Vs Razer (5-2)
Tha*Reign*Man Vs Razer (0-5)
Puertoricanelly Vs Razer (0-5)
guyver4mk Vs Razer (0-3): (Gave Up)
Da Greatest Vs Razer (0-5)

4 Wins, 3 Knockouts, 1 Loss.
 
Old 03-18-04, 06:06 AM   #6
Razer
Flyweight
 
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From: South London, UK
IP: 22ED 1BB0

YO IM just upping this piece yeh people. Pe@ce out!!!!
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Razer Vs Dagreatest

Text Record:
Will A Peer Vs Razer (5-2)
Tha*Reign*Man Vs Razer (0-5)
Puertoricanelly Vs Razer (0-5)
guyver4mk Vs Razer (0-3): (Gave Up)
Da Greatest Vs Razer (0-5)

4 Wins, 3 Knockouts, 1 Loss.
 
Old 03-18-04, 09:35 AM   #7
Razer
Flyweight
 
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From: South London, UK
IP: 22ED 1BB0

Upping............................................ ........................................
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Razer Vs Dagreatest

Text Record:
Will A Peer Vs Razer (5-2)
Tha*Reign*Man Vs Razer (0-5)
Puertoricanelly Vs Razer (0-5)
guyver4mk Vs Razer (0-3): (Gave Up)
Da Greatest Vs Razer (0-5)

4 Wins, 3 Knockouts, 1 Loss.
 
Old 03-18-04, 09:36 AM   #8
DirtBoy69
i changed my title !!
 
From: Kincardine Ontario
IP: 275E DC37

alright nice verse good personals lets gets some votes now!!!!!!!!!!!!! come on uppin this
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


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Old 03-18-04, 01:20 PM   #9
Razer
Flyweight
 
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From: South London, UK
IP: 22ED 1BB0

Hmm, just upping..............................Come on people.
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Razer Vs Dagreatest

Text Record:
Will A Peer Vs Razer (5-2)
Tha*Reign*Man Vs Razer (0-5)
Puertoricanelly Vs Razer (0-5)
guyver4mk Vs Razer (0-3): (Gave Up)
Da Greatest Vs Razer (0-5)

4 Wins, 3 Knockouts, 1 Loss.
 
Old 03-18-04, 01:22 PM   #10
puertoricanelly
Rb's Teacher
 
From: KILLAFORNIA
IP: ADCB 7E30

ayy vote on this shit..... heres the link, good looking out!

PUERTORICANELLY VS. FUROSHIS
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Old 03-18-04, 01:35 PM   #11
Issachar
New to RB
 
IP: AAE0 210B

Razer's punches and personals didn't really land. You have to spin it pretty cleverly to get much mileage out of dissing a kid's poor spelling; otherwise it just looks like you're really reaching for stuff to criticize. Spending the first four lines building up to that (with a fag joke thrown in) was pretty much a waste of space. After that point, the verse got a little better: three punches thrown, but nothing to raise any eyebrows.

DirtBoy packed his short verse with personals, most of which were pretty much on target, and wins the vote on those grounds despite some awkwardness in the rhyme scheme.
 
Old 03-18-04, 10:03 PM   #12
DirtBoy69
i changed my title !!
 
From: Kincardine Ontario
IP: 275E DC37

vote!!!!!!!!!!!! come on lets get some votes for this i wanna finish this battle
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


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Old 03-19-04, 10:08 AM   #13
DirtBoy69
i changed my title !!
 
From: Kincardine Ontario
IP: 275E DC37

votes come on now why the sleeping??? really this isn't a bad battle lets get some votes for it
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


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Old 03-19-04, 01:54 PM   #14
lilkdogg1988
Light Weight
 
From: Philidelphia Pa
IP: 08B7 7EED

Ight ight yo that was dope! First and for most big up to both of y'all for a very sick battle but now is the time to vote. the both you you had mad skill and very hard hits, at first i couldn't decide but check it no disrespect to either of y'all but Razor took it it was really close but he took it by one line!
 
Old 03-19-04, 02:17 PM   #15
double c
New to RB
 
From: borders of south london
IP: A9FD 5017

razer took that one but it was close. i thought the spellin line was alrite,69 was good but just not good enough

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