i liked this sexy beat, and i had some shit written to it that was only like 1 min and 20 secs long, so i freestyled the rest, and dont mind the singing at the end lmao that was just fuckin around cuz i'm sexy like that

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btw tell me if they quality is good or ass, drop ya lil links too and i'll peep ur bullshit niccas

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yo i'm feelin this cuzzin
like ya voice and flow is good.. lyrics were good..liked ya topic
it sound like u stumbled on a few words but otha than that the flow was straight
only thing i suggest is u seperate ya freestyles and writtens on a song...
Like even thought both were good... the written was much better than the freestyle... so u could have put them on seperate traks

quality is good..no distortion.... its aight
peace

thanks bro, i'll chekc ya shit out

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do u enjoy sleeping? wake up!

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shouldve kept it a written...probably wouldve been better.....your delivery was off, but you caught your flow after the first bar....this was ok, i wasn't really feelin it as much.....keep the ending part (singing) out.....lol....this was an ok drop....keep postin tho....OnE...

thank u c-nice...ur vey nice c

uppinging

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only 14, you got talentz... keep writin/rehearsin, it'd make a nice complete track. lovin that beat, you write it?

That 'We Came' track was hot too.

if u need some free beats for freestylin take look at my page.

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oh word thanks bro

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