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Rulez Should Be Obvious May The Best Emcee Win

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After this battle, you’ll remember that I’m the emcee that “gave-you-scars”
You didn’t know your destined to lose like you never “played-with-cards”
Claiming you elevated, but you can’t even “raise-the-bar”
I dominate this “post” like Kareem Abdul-Jabar….

Spiting my hottest shit like I put my verse in a microwave
You will die-in-shame, admitting that, “my-flows-lame”
Gkillaz is one emcee that LD-should-waive….

Your like blonde-headed Japanese, a “disgrace” to this culture
Eating up whack ass emcees like I was Rap battle’s vulture

Put you in a mental hospital, I am darkening-fools
Fake gangsters like you are slaves to hip-hop’s marketing-tool (if you’ve seen his pic)

If you “killing” “Gs”, you’re a suspect for murdering Pac
Now you destroying what rap’s God created
Fake Gs like you are one thing he hated
Your verse should be fire walled from RB and Triple X-rated......

Rocking a D12 sweater, you must be Em’s number-one-fan
Your aggression from a loss will have you committing suicide like Stan

You need to eat weed before this battle, so you could spit-a-joint-friend
26-4, but after seeing this, your nothing but a dis-a-ppoint-ment
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123755

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Im comin at this guy wit so many toasters turnin him into burnt-bread...
Wernt-ahead of me in this race now you want to close this current-thread...
My punches shred you and leave you hurtin like I was wearin brass knuckles...
Mike12Ikedas style is harmful to his self like drivin drunk wit no seat buckles...
Everyone just chuckles.. no one on this site could care less if you live-or-die...
Mike is like a toothpick and im snappin him in half gettin a sliver-in-his-eye...
You wonder why your whack when your fav song the goo goo dolls - Iris...
Claims that he's a vet, but blaims that whack spit on a computer virus...
He prayed for some hot linez but came out wit some shit that was played...
Aint gun get paid for your rapz might as well go join up wit a masquerade*...
Starting up a lemonade stand for some money its Mike's last resort...
You got no support, like your wearin 9 inch heals your still goin to fall short..
Start up a school report on how you wish you had skills, your style ima boycott..
YOu bought it at a dolla store but they forgot to tell you that its squat...
Style just keeps changin like everyday of the week, Ima start your losin streak...
Could be pop eye wit a life supply of spinage and punches still would be weak...
Your just an internet geek, like a hockey net wit no posts your all net...
Internet beef dont pose a threat, you could rap for 50 years still aint gun be a vet...
There was no feedin allowed, so Mike turns into a Starving Kid from Ontario...
About to finish him off with my 20th Line, thats this Rap Battles scenario...


*masquerade:
verb: pretend to be someone or something that you are not

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Gkillaz-Came hard like always I liked it

Best line-
Style just keeps changin like everyday of the week, Ima start your losin streak...
Could be pop eye wit a life supply of spinage and punches still would be weak...

Worst line-
Everyone just chuckles.. no one on this site could care less if you live-or-die...
Mike is like a toothpick and im snappin him in half gettin a sliver-in-his-eye...

Mike-You was alright...keep tryin though lets see how ya did

Best line-
Put you in a mental hospital, I am darkening-fools
Fake gangsters like you are slaves to hip-hop’s marketing-tool (if you’ve seen his pic)


Worst line-
Spiting my hottest shit like I put my verse in a microwave
You will die-in-shame, admitting that, “my-flows-lame”
Gkillaz is one emcee that LD-should-waive….


OVERALL-Both did good but gkillaz did come on top...both had everything
Nice battle keep elevatin ya will be there aight

v/Gkillaz

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alright here's the breakdown...

first up gkillaz...
hahahah sick battle...hot everything man...good concepts...nice personalls...everything was centered...nice shit man

fave line
Starting up a lemonade stand for some money its Mike's last resort...
You got no support, like your wearin 9 inch heals your still goin to fall short..


worst line...none

8/10

no for mike

hmmm some good concepts although alot were played...i did enjoy your structure...good text man...keep it coming...you had one line that stood out...

Spiting my hottest shit like I put my verse in a microwave
You will die-in-shame, admitting that, “my-flows-lame”
Gkillaz is one emcee that LD-should-waive….

besides that i think people overestimated you when they said you were most underated...for this spit anyways...but keep it coming dude

v g

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UPPIN for votes on this shit, 2-0 .. lets keep em comin

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yo mike won this plain to see. gkillaz you must have mad dick rhyders cuz the same niggas vote for you. you only had a couple of decent lines. no wow factor in your rhymes. you need to step up. the reason why you win so much is b/c you write so many lines. 20 lines try 10-12. i bet you couldn't catch a win then. not a hater post by no means i would give it to mike. nice punches and multiples. you stayed consistent throughout the whole verse. you didn't just have a few good lines. keep it up.gkillaz nice verse but you need improvement.

vote=mike

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THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE

I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS

SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE

I think G-Killaz had this one due to better flow. Mike needs to step it up a bit

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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Win #1 - Whitey313; 5-0
Win #2 - Rikachet; 5-0
Win #3 - Thug Nation; 5-0
Win #4 - Cityboi; 5-1
Win #5 - $ik; 5-0
Win #6 - BillyGunz; 5-0

Aight Check Dis..

GKillaz05: 6/10
Your Verse Was Nice, Decent Punches THrown Here...But Your Personals Were Lacking and Your Structure Wasn't THat Nice But The Flow Was Aight...Keep Dope and Active.

Mike12: 5/10
Your Verse Was Aight, Your Punches Weren't As Hot As I Thought They'd Be, But They Could've Been Better With More Wordplay and Personals. Work On Metaphors, Punches, and Structure.

Vote - GKillaz

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MIKE

After this battle, you’ll remember that I’m the emcee that “gave-you-scars”
You didn’t know your destined to lose like you never “played-with-cards”
Claiming you elevated, but you can’t even “raise-the-bar”
I dominate this “post” like Kareem Abdul-Jabar….
-Nice opener and way to set it off,

Spiting my hottest shit like I put my verse in a microwave
You will die-in-shame, admitting that, “my-flows-lame”
Gkillaz is one emcee that LD-should-waive….
-Not bad tight flow solid punch

Your like blonde-headed Japanese, a “disgrace” to this culture
Eating up whack ass emcees like I was Rap battle’s vulture
-haha that first line is funny, nice punch, creative as well

Put you in a mental hospital, I am darkening-fools
Fake gangsters like you are slaves to hip-hop’s marketing-tool (if you’ve seen his pic)
-alright, kinda lost ya on the last bit, I haven't seen his pic, ya gotta watch that.

If you “killing” “Gs”, you’re a suspect for murdering Pac
Now you destroying what rap’s God created
Fake Gs like you are one thing he hated
Your verse should be fire walled from RB and Triple X-rated......
-This was alright not really feel'n it but still nice flow through the bars

Rocking a D12 sweater, you must be Em’s number-one-fan
Your aggression from a loss will have you committing suicide like Stan
-Good solid punch I'd give most of these 6.5-7's

You need to eat weed before this battle, so you could spit-a-joint-friend
26-4, but after seeing this, your nothing but a dis-a-ppoint-ment
-Tight finisher, just like you started the battle





G KILLAZ

Im comin at this guy wit so many toasters turnin him into burnt-bread...
Wernt-ahead of me in this race now you want to close this current-thread...
-Nice opener almost as hot as his was if not even

My punches shred you and leave you hurtin like I was wearin brass knuckles...
Mike12Ikedas style is harmful to his self like drivin drunk wit no seat buckles...
-Thats was good creative to come up with seat buckles for the rhyme, nice

Everyone just chuckles.. no one on this site could care less if you live-or-die...
Mike is like a toothpick and im snappin him in half gettin a sliver-in-his-eye...
-Nice multi with the previous, and a nice punch

You wonder why your whack when your fav song the goo goo dolls - Iris...
Claims that he's a vet, but blaims that whack spit on a computer virus...
Hahah thats funny shit, and origional as well

He prayed for some hot linez but came out wit some shit that was played...
Aint gun get paid for your rapz might as well go join up wit a masquerade*...
-Not bad, not really feel'n it,

Starting up a lemonade stand for some money its Mike's last resort...
You got no support, like your wearin 9 inch heals your still goin to fall short..
-Origional it seems but heard somthing similar to it a couple days ago, at least the lemonade stand part, the second line was a nice punch

Start up a school report on how you wish you had skills, your style ima boycott..
YOu bought it at a dolla store but they forgot to tell you that its squat...
-Arougd this point you took the win, and you still have more punches left, always good

Style just keeps changin like everyday of the week, Ima start your losin streak...
Could be pop eye wit a life supply of spinage and punches still would be weak...
-Nice flow, and multi's but the punch didn't really hit, maybe to wordy

Your just an internet geek, like a hockey net wit no posts your all net...
Internet beef dont pose a threat, you could rap for 50 years still aint gun be a vet...
Nice punch, solid style again

There was no feedin allowed, so Mike turns into a Starving Kid from Ontario...
About to finish him off with my 20th Line, thats this Rap Battles scenario...
-That was the best finisher of the battle, thats why you won in general more punches, and more taht hit harder.

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