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mentality | 5 | 100.00% | |
flash | 0 | 0% | |
Voters: 5. You may not vote on this poll |
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02-03-04, 05:50 PM | #1 |
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flash |vs| mentality
IP: 02C8 475B
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you spit first no hate/dr/crew/dickridin votes 20mins to spit afta check in |
02-03-04, 05:58 PM | #2 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 029B 818C
aight aight aight
checkin into this and i will spit soon |
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02-03-04, 06:04 PM | #3 |
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IP: 02C8 475B
iight i aint got time to wiat for you to spit....but htere is no feedin off my lines and shit so ima spit first....
this is my check in and shit |
02-03-04, 06:05 PM | #4 |
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IP: 02C8 475B
ite ite
startin off Im Flowin-true you just blowin-dudes couldn’t follow in my footsteps if he owned my shoes Rip my-foes-in-two im known to leave a hole-in-dudes forgetfull bitch your just prone to lose Its a case, N Im simply tryin to impress the Jury As u battle against me, u Infuse mah fury Make Mah Blows, Hit like Mah flo's,Like sno its a flurry Rearrange ur flesh frame, so ur vision's taint and blurry Burn ya, cook ya, Impale u and stir like Emcee Curry Rip ya name-off the way, just to say its done in a hurry change up the style will never Beat me, I won, ya Future is Fore-Told U still won’t Know if I sent u back in Time and Told U In Morse Code a Lame Bitch, Get burned when tha Flamez Blast Brainz Bashed, As far as yo corpse goes, Ya Framez Scrapped |
02-03-04, 06:09 PM | #5 | |
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here he goes.....
IP: 029B 818C
Your a sorry excuse for a rapper, rhymes are like the worst apology
Im complex like diverse astrology,Flip your rhymes back till you think that you'll win....kinda like reverse Physology You pissed me off, im pullin out all stops, when i leave your jaw clocked Flash excited about puberty for New Years, whole family watched his Balls Drop Check it, it's like i swallowed a gat the way i spit shots, my shits hot His hit not, fuckin around wit clumsy ropes you'll end up in a slipknot You stupid, for thinkin of givin me a try, i'll jet this guy Just watch me round up wins, when i put this pest aside* Sit back, i'll dismantle your spits, and rattle your shit Your like a virgin with a female dog, you cant even handle a bitch Now i'll burn your text with ease, you cant stand next to these Im like Demi Moore dawg, i got expert tease...* Explanations: *=round up kills pesticides **=Demi moore was in a movie called striptease |
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02-03-04, 06:15 PM | #6 | |
Light Weight
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IP: 4577 CD9A
o man flash.....u have 3 active battlez at once......u gonna get dq'd if seen by a mod.....
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02-03-04, 08:25 PM | #7 | |
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IP: C1DA C961
^true
this battle was pretty close to one sided although Mentality had some really off structure he made up on it with killer punches, nice word play, and a good use of multies Flash was just a little too simple and that took away from his verse, the punches you threw out could have been re-worded so that the point got across better or that it flowed with the previous line, and switchin' up the sturcture was okay i guess, but i guess it was worth something overall this was a good battle, but I'm gunna have to vote for Mentality
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02-03-04, 09:23 PM | #8 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 029B 818C
uppin 1
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02-03-04, 09:35 PM | #9 | |
Banned: Compromised Account
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IP: 64C2 D7B2
Mentality - you had really bad flow, when u started off your lines were really stretched, and then u even had some lines that went on to a 2nd line..then towards the end the lines shortened which was better but the front still was horrible. but then on the other hand, your punches werent that bad, infact alot were good. you had some decent word play, and ya verse wasnt that basic...metas were just ok though.
Flash, u didnt come very hard..alot of ya concepts were basic and the punches u laid out could have been much better..you coulda reworded alot of em and made them more complex and increased how hard they hit. add metas and personals to them, and try to make ya concepts less basic..work on ya set up of ya punches too. at the start.. your first bar was packed wit multis........yea....they mean shit, try to replace all of them wit punches, thats whats important. also..to add..ya first bar was stretched, each line took up 2 lines...and thats stretched to hell! when u changed up ya struct, ya flow was better then u changed it again and it was still ok but wasnt as consistent...so basically, u need to work on the keys of battling...punches and flow/struct. it took away from ya verse alot not having those...cuz basically thats everything overall - flash's verse was simple and not hard hitting, he lacked in everything. mentality took this battle wit harder punches, better wordplay, and a more complex verse overall
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02-04-04, 04:43 PM | #10 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 029B 818C
uppin 2
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02-04-04, 08:07 PM | #11 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 029B 818C
uppin 3
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02-05-04, 04:43 PM | #12 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 029B 818C
uppin 4 VOTE just dont look
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02-06-04, 10:41 AM | #13 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 029B 818C
uppin again..............vote
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02-06-04, 04:33 PM | #14 | |
Guest
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IP: 4577 CD9A
hahahahaha...dix battle was wak..nedd betta evrytin..punches..flow..structure...neways i dunno who 2 vote for
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02-06-04, 05:05 PM | #15 | |
Banned
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IP: 24A3 0EF0
aight Mentality took this 1 even though some of his verse was ack he had some decent shit.iliked ur flow it was smooth,ur punches were hittin hard...........
Flash iwasnt impressed with ur vere..........the flow was patchy,the punches were weak, the Opener was not bad though........... V,Mentality........ |
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