Battle Rules:

20 max
No Recycling
No Biting

this is a battle between songs choose the better one and holla

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-06-04 at 06:17 PM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

BrOTheRP.A.R.A. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 06:18 AM.

People tellin me im not good anofe/
to make it in the game but ill just stand up tall and buff/.
and tell em straight off wit my hardcore rhyme/
i will be gettin better from time to time/.
i spit into the mic on top of my comp/
and say yer done i stomped you out/.
and how about i say it with a (shout)/. (loud)

i wanna take my rap to the pro's/
so i can get some hoe's/.
so im gonna be gettin better ill be pushin my self/
to do my best ill take my rap to the top/
and be number one on all the charts and never stop/.
ill be one of the best not sayin im am the best yet/
but i bet im gonna be set/
so ill be putin down all the people who said i couldent do it with a threat/

dysphoria has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 06:35 AM.

Through My Eyes

Longin' desperately to get out of emotional struggle ... From hard times to weak minds I emerge from the trouble (1)
But the anger and despair plagues me from day to day ... No bells of freedom, could I be trapped in my ways ? (2)
Puttin' forth the effort to livin' a better life ... But through my eyes all I see is franticness and strife (3)
If I could bring you to my world to see what I see ... Then you'll visualize the rap world has no place for me (4)
Painfully obvious, I see the picture is to get richer ... I guess theres no room for deep and intellectual scriptures (5)
The end result, borin' delivery and bubble gum lyrics ... Conclusion of disillusion, sedative souls and mindless spirits (6)
Nowadays I see it's all about the bling ... But wouldn't rap be borin' if we were all after the same thing ? (7)
Think about it, would you want to ask you favourate rapper a question ... To get pass all the bullshit and right down to the confession (8)
Like, what happened to hip-ho's glory days of chivalry ? What happened to the unique flows and precise deliveries ? (9)
What happened to the honest and original lyrics ? What happened to the fans touched souls and moved spirits ? (10)
When did "buying the bar" become a essential part of hip-hop ? And when did original lyrics become "not so hot" ? (11)
Now I don't expect you to be all you can be ... I'm tired of the same answers, different questions "I'm just tryin' to do me" (12)
Cause hip-hops streets of gold are tarnished from the unpleasant weather ... The ultimate choice do I survive or get severed ? (13)
From the worldly walk of life it's clear that I made my choice ... To progress as a individual, finally I can rejoice (14)

Voted For: dysphoria

yo dat was tite Dys yall both had good songs, but Dys u had a beta flo n a betta emotional expect of it, so yea this goes to u but yall return da favor man so i can finish dat battle, http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140117,
iite 1 love

guy it was 20 max you cant vote on that no votes for him hes over lines 20 is max

i had 14 lines hommie .. i even numbered them for you .. unless u can't count !

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Voted For: dysphoria

Ok, again...not breaking down the lines, take much to long and no use for em...one sided battle

BrOTheRP.A.R.A.-weak...no vocab, no wordplay...stretched lines in your bottom half...ok flow...it could of been better if you made it longer with better vocabs..used some multis n metas, and had some wordplay...real weak "song"

dysphoria-Good Vocab, a couple of multis here and there, but nothing to special..your structure was stretched at times which messed with the flow, but a decent "song"...more original

Vote: Dysphoria
Reason:Came with better vocab, more multis and an overall better "song"

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Brother...your such a fuckin herb dude, can you not read the numbers beside his lines signifyin where the line stopped? and too Emergin...im proud of you, you actually gave good feedback on a battle...our little emcee is growing up =D

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no man im stoned i can read easy im fuckin baked lol

exactly what i said.................you an herb

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yea

maybe you should sober up before you battle..you'd probly do better..i dunno tho..im more creative when im fucked up

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