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Clearly defined, drawn that line
I can see old signs, pointing skyward. Another day going foward with or without me I trudge toward. Every movement aches, as I press on while I’m awake Nothing I can take will aleve this pain in my soul. Daily tasks, monotounus to ask, can’t believe I was the head of my class, back in the day of old. Thinkin bout the streets of gold, Lord I’ll be there soon, take me on to a place beyond where pain cannot ensue. I dream about it day and night as I struggle with this pain and might. Gonna give it up, oh gonna let go, all this hurt and nauseous woe. Feel the summer breeze across my face, as the window pane is open and my eyes start to haze, all the countless starts out tonight, Lord can one of them be mine? Think I’m dying pain is grappling, holding on tightly, slowily wrapping. Crying in pain, alone and not afraid, just wish it’d come quickly, Lord I can’t die in vain. So I repent, because I know that tonight will be my last I hope. I scream I’m sorry in the wind, wishing everyone I hurt could hear it within. I look down and see my body still. No movement on my house on a hill. I whisper to God thank you, in this place, marvelous it is, you should see his face. I see sirens now coming, someone’s worried, someone’s phoning my family my friends, my next of kin, tell em not to worry I’ve already written my earthly story.
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another good drop, again good flow and structure.....vocab was good also, another good topic, keep em comin
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![]() i come from a time when you earned respect, for your rhyme and the way you made words connect, not the money that you made or the girls you sexed, a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
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