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08-18-04, 09:27 PM | #1 | |||||
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Think Again...storytelling ish
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Think Again
Now Paula was a young girl who was fifteen/ But she never told anyone about her sick dreams/ She dreamt of killing a fetus, after feeling a penis/ It’s not she wasn’t smart she was really a genius/ She realized her thoughts were sick and demented/ Dreaming of a devil who was giving her presents/ She met Tommy, who was a high school senior/ An intelligent gentlemen with a cool demeanor/ After school every day he would walk her home/ And he made her bad dreams crumble like a domino/ He would call her phone, and plan to make dates/ He would take her for a ride in his van and vacate/ A couple of dates pass now her heart is burning/ Filled with imaginary love, tells him she’s a virgin/ Never had feelings like this so she had to set it straight/ And tells him that she’s ready to move past second base… Tommy got scared for a second and had to step away/ He was a virgin also and thought that was a better way/ Made plans to consummate their love on a weekend/ When his parents were out of town had to run a meeting/ He brought the condoms, cuz he didn’t want a problem/ His legs were shaking at the store when he bought them/ So finally the big day, he was nervous as hell/ Because he never did this he was a virgin as well/ Other guys had stories where they burn and they swell/ And if you had sex before marriage you’d be burning in hell/ Arrived at her house could he really deliver it/? He palms were sweaty, and his legs were quivering/ So they proceeded to have sex and in the middle of it/ He felt something snap and it was beginning to rip/ He thought this is how sex feels, so I better just chill/ Head was gonna explode and thought this is the best thrill… Next day at school, he went and blabbed to his friends/ She overheard the dirty talk and got mad at him then/ She threw a temper tantrum and said he wasn’t handsome/ She used him for sex because she really had to have some/ He yelled back that she was a dirty whore used and abused/ Profanities kept coming, they were both losing their cool/ So they broke up, Tommy started dating someone else/ They both couldn’t understand they take love as wealth/ A couple of weeks past, and she missed her period/ Now she realized that things are getting serious/ She calls Tommy, but Tommy wouldn’t call her back/ He’s having lots of sex now and thinks he’s all of that/ So she calls a help line, and they didn’t really help her/ She can’t tell her parents cuz her parents would scalp her/ So she keeps it to herself and everyday is cold and gray/ And she concludes that abortion is the only way/ So she went and got it done, now she’s crying in a corner/ In her mind all she sees is a child she had to slaughter/ Tommy still won’t call so she said the hell with it/ Cuz he’s going around now, telling people he’s celibate/ She has no one to talk to; walks around like a zombie/ Now she really regrets the day she had sex with Tommy/ Everyday is living hell, now she can’t find a meaning/ The next day they found her body hanging from a ceiling… holla....gonna be recorded soon.... |
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08-19-04, 06:12 AM | #2 | ||||||
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lol wack shit elavete
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08-19-04, 06:13 AM | #3 | ||||||
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1/10 vocab get some now!
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08-19-04, 07:17 PM | #4 | |||||
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blah...rise
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i only listen to your shit to remind me what not to do--tonedeff Last edited by illeagle : 08-22-04 at 08:10 PM. |
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08-22-04, 08:11 PM | #5 | |||||
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elevate
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08-22-04, 08:26 PM | #6 | |||||
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All of these tastless wastes of critic's I give u a 10/10 son....it had more then rap lines rhymes and a story...it actually painted a picture......Uppin
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08-22-04, 08:55 PM | #7 | ||||||
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thanx man....means alot... pz
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08-22-04, 09:08 PM | #8 | |||||||
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Deep drop from my boy. that first cat is a straight hater. this is ill
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