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06-29-04, 08:45 PM
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Shadow Vs Envee (Topical!)
IP: 797E BEFD
Topic: You runnin' from tha motherfuckin police.... Expand....
Bars: Unlimited Post: Only 1 time! Fair votes only No dick ridin No swayin No attackin oppent Due Tonight That should do for tha rules... |
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06-29-04, 09:28 PM
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bingo!
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IP: AAF4 20CB
i roll into the bank guns loaded ready to spray- i then yell "put the money in the bag..no delays- i then get in the car and speed down the street- sirens roar i then push the pedal under my feet- i think should i hide or will they try and find me- damn i gotta keep goin cuz they right behind me- i hear aloud pop.. then realize that its my tire- i now have no choice but to jump and open fire- a bullet flys by my and head luckily it missed- im enraged.. im just pissed.. clinchin my fists- ill do good time in jail and my record will be soiled- i gotta shoot as im realizing my plan cant be foiled- child hood memorys running are through my head- im also realizing that soon i may be left for dead- i shoot and hit one officer my anger turnes to fear- this one mistake ended my whole career- my chances of going big are now thrown out- just then i hear "officer down!" as the cop shouts- so while he's destracted i hottwire a parked car- the roads are almost empty thats bizarre- i exit to the highway witht he cop on my tail- petal to the floor and i hear other sirens wale- more cops and their followed by the swat team- im now in more trouble than i can believe- i can still escape theres still room for revival- gotta remain calm for any chance of survival- every thing feels as though its in slow motion- a helicoptor above me content on devotion- i will be shot cuz im putting others in harms way- thinking to myself god why did i wake up today- i see a sign that says slow down bridge up ahead- but i cant slow down...ill be filled with lead- this day is bad.. how much worse can it get?- i approach the bridge as my shirt is covered in sweat- this isnt a laughing matter not a to joke- with sweat my shirt is soaked left without hope- they say pullover i respond with no reaction- if i live to see tomorow ill think before my actions- was the money i stole really worth the sacrifice?- cuz if i get caught ill be locked up for life- on the bride cops in both sides i pull to a hault- i say lord please help me this wasnt my fault- im trapped with no options on the peak of the bridge- this is then when my will to die, succeeded my will to live- (i jumped ! )
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06-29-04, 11:20 PM
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...Tha Run...
IP: 797E BEFD
Chillin wit my boys they drainin haze and dope....
Im in tha bathroom washin my hands out wit soap... I hear a loud bang in tha living room it fills up wit screams.... Suddenly i hear "FREEZE" tha house is filled wit 2 SWAT teams... My ass is high so i jump thro tha bathroom window... I land on my ass from a 3 story jump thinkin my wifey b a widow... I try 2 get up and im limpin' but i run down tha street.... I get in my car and try to find tha keys 'they not there' i cant speak..... I left em back in tha house damn i cant go back its 2 far.... So i get out and run 2 get into tha cops car.... I get inside and start drivin down tha block... But at tha car comes a fuckin flyin rock.... My boys are defindin us from crooked cops... But im rollin down tha street in this Hated Medal Box... I scream its me guys get out tha way and STOP... I hear a siren in tha back its one and only cop... So im pushin tha gas and im well on on my way... Hopin that i dont get into jail for tha next day... Tha cops car is wired and DPSed so i needa leave... Tha radio is callin out Unit 21 from this nigga steve... So i stop and i jump out tha black and white peice of shit... (Rhymes if u I run thro gardens hear fire in tha back fuck i think im hit....pronouce it diff) No its just my legg that was cut in tha wired fence... I keep runnin my hearts racin thro this big suspence... ((PAUSEE)) I wake up and im on tha toilet i fell asleep high as hell... Tha cops break in i wanna shoot my self might as well... Theres no window 2 hop out into some yard.. I cant do shit here i think imma take tha jail card.... But i remember that i cant get locked up... My are all on they fuckin knees cuffed up.... Rick looks at me and i aint being even looked at.... Cause i told tha cops that all tha drugs where here wit Matt.... |
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06-29-04, 11:33 PM
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IP: 797E BEFD
Tha cops car is wired and DPSed so i needa leave...
Tha radio is callin out Unit 21 from this nigga steve. THATS GPS!!! sorry But i remember that i cant get locked up... My are all on they fuckin knees cuffed up.... Thats MY BOYS are all on they fuckin knees Yeah tha story is mad fucked up lol im such a creative muthafuckah... |
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07-06-04, 12:49 AM
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L.E
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IP: 0542 1084
Haha........Shadow had this shit easy..........but I cant vote since Shadow is in my crew.......
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07-07-04, 10:04 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 106D 7BEF
Shadow- nice drop...i was feelin your story more and he got attention
yours was more enjoyable...and you had a better flow and imagery more emotion in your verse too.. Eve- not really feelin it dogg....story was aight but could of been better you can still elevate dont know if you have done a topical before just put more emotion into your verse vote:Shadow |
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07-07-04, 10:18 PM
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IP: 4289 77F4
Shadow-you had it easy and you had good structure
and gave me more action to it and I liked it Because it was like It was there..Lol and some of the lines you have in yours is in mine and I wrote mine after yours lol Envee-Nah you didnt make it was a clear pic and I didnt really feel it but I liked it was worded and nice with it so keep elevatin v/Shadow Return the fav
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07-07-04, 10:44 PM
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Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: C3CE 96D1
Shadow...good imagery, lyrically coulda been better but even though rhymes were basic it was a tight story, well written an it was believable, an just an all round solid drop
Envee....you were ok, you didn't fully explain sometimes which took away from your story, an the lyricism was bout as basic as shadow, so I have to go on the strength of story an shadow took it there Vote: Shadow
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Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice Because at the end of the day, you get what you give So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is |
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07-07-04, 10:54 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: E5EB 11E6
Yo..Check It...
Shadow Took This With More Emotion, Flow, Structure and Just All Around Categories. Envee I Hope This Was Your First Cause Man You Need To Elevate In Topicals.... Vote - Shadow ~R~ |
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07-07-04, 11:30 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3240 794D
tight tight tight I was feelin this from both of yall
I think shadow was more on point, had the more poetic flow about it. I like these topical battles, they are pretty straight. Shadow had the better story, and he even had a name to it...I was totally feelin that shit. Envee just work on ya structure a lil bit...and get he flow down with it a lil better, not a bad story...just shadow was one up on ya on this one. v/shadow |
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