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MCelmersglue 1 16.67%
discharge 5 83.33%
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Old 04-30-04, 09:55 PM   #1
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10-13 lines
no crew
no d/r
u spit first
verse due 20 minutes after checkin in
good luck
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Old 04-30-04, 10:19 PM   #2
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It's time to get sticky and educate you,..hopefully something sticks to you..

Your flow is the lyrical equivalent to penis discharges.
It's a small scale of swimming semen compared to my fleet of naval barges.

Face it son, your words are like paddling in a kayak armed water balloons.
While I'm coming at you packing the torpedoes you lack and marine platoons.

Next to me man your flow is insignifficant, like you have a Napoleon Complexity.
it's just because as a MC I'm omnipotent, I see all your words before-hand so my mind protects me.

You have to realize that knowledge is essential and decides your power, not luck.
Since you don't have that you're like a prisoner dropping soap in the shower, just fucked.

Hopefully you learned something about what you need to succeed.
Because right now you're sure as hell not better than me.
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Now some of you will act like George Bush and always be on the attack, and it's probably just because I'm not black
Which is understandable but it doesn't make my flow any less wack
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Old 04-30-04, 10:45 PM   #3
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your wackass rhymes are played as shit,please dont deny it just admit//
"delete them then type "i cant win" ,after that just press submit//
your rhymes arnt legit, do your self a favor just forfit//
you cant spit, actually do us all a favor and just fucking quit//
you lose "so abanden your ship",now your ass is caught in a lyrical"tarpit//

what you kno about success, bitch you an your whole crew fail to impress//
no-skill is what u posses,if theyre was wack mc police ud be under arrest//
your a fag kid confess,even your mom that when you alone you where her dress//
your yelling like a damsal in distress,your rhymes are more confusing then chinese chess//
i won,no contest stop with tha nonsence, you cant beat me nigga im the best//

your a fucking joke, your gonna get smoked,your on a down hill slope.//
your shyt is far from dope,hey u cant win but u can always hope//
garentee you wont get one vote,its ok i guess if losin floats-your-boat//
i kno your angry but you dont got to m ope ur enraged cuz gays cant elope,//
with this loss u cant cope, to tellt he truth if you were a pro-rapper your ass would be broke//
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Old 04-30-04, 10:49 PM   #4
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That's all well and good, but when you make the rules it still doesn't mean you can break them... 10-13 lines, I count 15. And you fed off of my verse in one of your lines.

Ah well I don't guess it's no big deal
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Which is understandable but it doesn't make my flow any less wack
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Old 04-30-04, 10:55 PM   #5
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WOW CLOSE BATTLE THIS IS HOW IT IS

DISCHARGE
FLOW=8
PUNCHES=8
OPEN=10
CLOSE=7

MCelmersglue
FLOW=7
PUNCHES=6
OPEN=8
CLOSE=7

I WAS FEELING DISCHARGES FLOW MORE THATS Y I GAVE HIM THE VOTE
 
Old 04-30-04, 10:57 PM   #6
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A real mcee can handle as much bars as possible... i gotta give this shit to discharge... that starting bar had it all beat...
what you kno about success, bitch you an your whole crew fail to impress//
no-skill is what u posses,if theyre was wack mc police ud be under arrest//
that was also a tight bar
i kno your angry but you dont got to m ope ur enraged cuz gays cant elope,//
with this loss u cant cope, to tellt he truth if you were a pro-rapper your ass would be broke//
that was ur worst line.. but other than that u did well

vote=discharge
 
Old 04-30-04, 11:33 PM   #7
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MC...it's Napoleon Complex...not complexity

it's just because as a MC I'm omnipotent, I see all your words before-hand so my mind protects me.

^^^...and that's not really omnipotence...more like Omnicience...wrong word


your yelling like a damsal in distress,your rhymes are more confusing then chinese chess//
i won,no contest stop with tha nonsence, you cant beat me nigga im the best//


^^^..actual attempt at clever punches and wordplay


Vote: Discharge...MC's verse had too many mistakes for me...and discharge had harder punches..


Vote: Dis...
 
Old 04-30-04, 11:37 PM   #8
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MC elmers glue... reasons why...

Your flow is the lyrical equivalent to penis discharges.
It's a small scale of swimming semen compared to my fleet of naval barges.
^^Tight line...its kinda what i said in the championship battle but less complex

thats hwy mc elmers glue wins cause of complexity and structre
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Old 04-30-04, 11:46 PM   #9
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^^^^^^ what the fuck kinda vote is that ???? thats fucked up
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Old 04-30-04, 11:48 PM   #10
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glue´s best punch
Since you don't have that you're like a prisoner dropping soap in the shower, just fucked.

discharge
what you kno about success, bitch you an your whole crew fail to impress//
no-skill is what u posses,if theyre was wack mc police ud be under arrest//
his ending was sick too

i think glue just had nice structure and really good vocab. he lacked flow and the personals and wordplays. since discharge came harder with the wordplays and personals, and multies like your a fucking joke, your gonna get smoked,your on a down hill slope.//
your shyt is far from dope,hey u cant win but u can always hope//
garentee you wont get one vote,its ok i guess if losin floats-your-boat//
i think he won
v--discharge
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Old 04-30-04, 11:52 PM   #11
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would you like a more complex vote hurr....

Discharge... nice structre all lines are uneven and more than 20 sylables thats horible
you had three bars... with mad played rhymes which you need to work on hardcore... and there is complexity with rhymin dress with arrest are you remidial

your yelling like a damsal in distress,your rhymes are more confusing then chinese chess//
i won,no contest stop with tha nonsence, you cant beat me nigga im the best//

^ Ok one there is no such thing as chinese chess its checkers...number two your new here how can you say your the best....

ok mc elmers glue...
He came wit much more complexity...instead of battlin shit like hope..dope...
his rhymes got multies and come harder like this line

Next to me man your flow is insignifficant, like you have a Napoleon Complexity.
it's just because as a MC I'm omnipotent, I see all your words before-hand so my mind protects me.
^^ Kinda stretched but i would have to say from bieng expierenced its not completly easy to rhyme words with complexity so his rhyme scheme is way better you catch my drift essay...
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Old 04-30-04, 11:55 PM   #12
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now thank you thats all i ask man dont get all denfessive im just saying at least explain it longer so i kno what i did wrong
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Old 04-30-04, 11:57 PM   #13
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would you like a more complex vote hurr....

Discharge... nice structre all lines are uneven and more than 20 sylables thats horible
you had three bars... with mad played rhymes which you need to work on hardcore... and there is complexity with rhymin dress with arrest are you remidial

your yelling like a damsal in distress,your rhymes are more confusing then chinese chess//
i won,no contest stop with tha nonsence, you cant beat me nigga im the best//

^ Ok one there is no such thing as chinese chess its checkers...number two your new here how can you say your the best....

ok mc elmers glue...
He came wit much more complexity...instead of battlin shit like hope..dope...
his rhymes got multies and come harder like this line

Next to me man your flow is insignifficant, like you have a Napoleon Complexity.
it's just because as a MC I'm omnipotent, I see all your words before-hand so my mind protects me.
^^ Kinda stretched but i would have to say from bieng expierenced its not completly easy to rhyme words with complexity so his rhyme scheme is way better you catch my drift essay...

its nepolean complex not complexity so if u gonna say shit bout my chess line say shit bout his napolean rhyme
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Old 05-01-04, 12:00 AM   #14
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do you not know what nopoleon complex is.... it is when you are little and you think your big .... thats called a punch sorry bout free postin... but just puttin ya in ya place b...so he added some shit at the end think about it is it harder to rhyme complex or complexity...hmm....
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Old 05-01-04, 12:09 AM   #15
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[QUOTE=.::N-Sight::.]MC...it's Napoleon Complex...not complexity

it's just because as a MC I'm omnipotent, I see all your words before-hand so my mind protects me.

^^^...and that's not really omnipotence...more like Omnicience...wrong word
[QUOTE]

Alrighty, I guess it's time to educate YOU...

You can say "Napoleon Complex" both ways in part of speech I used it in.
The "Complex" part speaks of a condition in the brain, and imbalance of chemicals that makes you feel inferior because you're small,.. it's a COMPLEXITY with your brain,.. Complex or Complexity, it goes both ways.

And second, OMNIPOTENT, than basically means someone like a God, with the powers of God, a diety,.. and God is all knowing therefore he knows everything, past, present, future.

Before you start coming at me all intellectual, know who your dealing with.
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