Not a full song but intro type shit.

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Left feedback on Motivated and A.S.A.P.

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Listening...

Trippy beat...nice...Quality is a lil on the downside...Flow is decent...Delivery is lacking...sounds a little down on the emotion...nice track, we should collab sometime...

Return the favor, "No We Won'"...

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First thing I noticed is ya muffled quality....sounds like u hiss reduced too much or prolly used a dynamic processor.....your eqing needs serious tweaking to get clairity in ya drops.....ya flow seems forced...instead of flowing naturally your trying to hit the snare....on every rhyme word ya vocie slightly "jumps"...cuz your timing ya lines instead of jus flowing naturally...your deliver isn't horrible its improving..u def. aiing to be a laid-back emcee which is cool u jus got learn how to flucuate ya voice better...make more drastic changes in your tone an the whole demeanor of ya voice while u flowing...lyrically this was dissapointing due to text drops I read of yours...ya rhyme scheme stayed the same thru most of track..lol at u mentioning one of ya few multies....try using mulite syllable rhymes....laid back emcees usually use those to seem more lively...it force u to change the pitch of ya voice naturally..then jus dub'em an u good......anyways hope this helps.....1

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Word. It does. Thanks.

Get on AIM so you can help with that nah mean?

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Beat is coo...Quality is ehhh...could be better...Flow is straight...Delivery could be better...sounds kind of boring to me...you need to get more comfortable on the mic...Lyrics is ok...Overall was a decent drop...but still needs some work...

Return favor...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=186354

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bump por favor.

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