Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio |
12-05-04, 08:26 PM | #1 | |||||||
New to RB
|
drug dealer
IP: B668 5D61
i got tons of guns, and i slang lots of rocks/
i got money funds, and i hustle these blocks/ i can't sell u none, cuz there be all da cops/ i don't wanna run, their bullets make me drop/ come back tomorrow, if you got the cash/ i can't let u borrow, from my bosses stash/ because he'd kill me mayne, he'd kill u too/ i don't like feelin pain, i don't think its cool/ my boss he'd go insain, leave me in a blood pool/ than he'd get in his range, and he'd come for you/ i'm a drug dealer, u could call me a snitch/ it don't get no realer, i would kill u bitch/ i sell lots of dope, and i also cook it/ take ya cake u don't know, who took it/ make the cleanest nigga go, crooked/
__________________
"california jus makes a playa wanna ride/ throw up a dub if ya thug holla westside/" - T-Bone |
|||||||
12-06-04, 04:36 AM | #2 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
|
IP: E8C7 F98A
thsi was wack u cam to wanna be gangster lol drop that and work on ur vocab u got good flow u should do audio lol
__________________
O.Y.D. |
||||
12-06-04, 09:13 AM | #3 | |||||||
***cITYSLICka***
|
IP: F2B1 8D50
very simple.flow was good,everything else was really basic.try to make it more complex.keep em comin'
__________________
I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY, ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there) EVIL............backwards =............LIVE |
|||||||
12-06-04, 04:22 PM | #4 | ||||
...The Truth...
|
IP: 28AD 5545
Yall Say Its Wack Cuz U Dont Understand Westcoast Hip Hop, This Was Koo Man, I No Wat U Talkin Bout, Keep It Up
__________________
...Done Wit The Games...
...Time to Get On My Grown Man... |
||||
12-06-04, 04:40 PM | #5 | ||||
FuCk YoU I RhYme BeTtEr
|
IP: 8499 7FA9
It Wasnt Bad, But Yo Need To Work On It Some...its To Gangsta Really...but No Hate...keep It Up...7/10...~1~
__________________
"I didnt choose this life, this life chose me" EveryDay Its the same old song, and the feeling is always gone
.:THE JURY:. HONOR and RESPECT |
||||
Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
Display Modes | |
|
|