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LyricalJedi 0 0%
Reflektionz 5 100.00%
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Old 01-01-04, 06:42 AM   #1
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LyricalJedi-Vs ReflekTionz

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10-12 lines
u drop first
checkin so i can start
drop in 20 minutes
lets do this a freestyle kid

u down checkin
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Old 01-01-04, 06:44 AM   #2
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Checkin in aiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigggggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhh ttttttttttttttttttt I will drop in my next line
 
Old 01-01-04, 06:58 AM   #3
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What the fuck this nigga calls himself reflektionz
that spelling needs some correction
nigga you wack even if you don't think so
I drop mothafuckas like plinko
Nigga you die like Brandon Lee in the crow
so nigga give me the crown
Fuck it I shooting your blackhawk down you fuckin clown
This nigga smoking shit that fuck up his brain
battling me is like going out like Kurt covain

Explanation:
Blackhawk duh where he is from lol
smoking his occupation
 
Old 01-01-04, 07:00 AM   #4
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Good luck bro I am about to sleep and shit peace out let get these mothafuckin votes and shit vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvoooooooooooooooooooooootttttttttttt ttttttttttttttttttttteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee vote vote vote
 
Old 01-01-04, 07:04 AM   #5
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This Jedi is in stored for battles scars that hit an kill newbs..
your outa barz .this aint star warz but let the force be wit u..
im instituting a beating on the weak that cant spit a sentence
my new years revolution was to drill mc's like i was the dentist..
im teachin a lesson.fuk a lyrical obeewakanobee wannabe..
honestly kid u thought ya mind wudnt start wondering..
threw sites lookin to copy an past pondering to leagues..
hopin to find an bite a verse that got punches up there sleeves..
I believe your 0-2 this wont be ya first W so ill leave speechless..
rap game just leave it.I aint playin like the disable at recess..
only time u spittin is when u sneeze bitch so regardless.
i new u was wak since day one.your just a starving artist..
takin hard hits from a vet in a newb disguise ..
quick to dimize a plan to unleash the wrath of a legend/VEt
u heading for mayhem..even if u was osama u cudnt be sending threats..
bending necks wit my text.i dont no why u tryed comparing ILL..
my punches knockin this bitch out he fell out his dads computer chair..
get killed quick i spray slugs an spit till i fry the mic..
this battles over quicker then me hitting submit reply..
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Old 01-01-04, 03:55 PM   #6
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Nice rhymes yo lets get some votes from the people on this piece I know keep real aiight. Just vote vote vote .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......................
 
Old 01-01-04, 09:03 PM   #7
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yea nice
lets vote
u[ppin on this shit
nice drop kid not bad
uppin onthi shit im tryna get votes.

im keyed as fuk
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Old 01-01-04, 11:16 PM   #8
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Reflectionz Got This..

His Punches Hitted Harder Than That Other Cat..


im instituting a beating on the weak that cant spit a sentence
my new years revolution was to drill mc's like i was the dentist..

That Was Prolly The Best Line In This Whole Thread


The First Catt...Elavate A Little Mo''


Vote-Relfektionz
 
Old 01-01-04, 11:34 PM   #9
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uppim thanks for the honest vote...............
uppin............................................# ##################2
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Old 01-02-04, 01:45 AM   #10
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Yeah I have to leave in the middle of the battle so I don't blame you for that vote hell I did not read his rhymes but hey I will read it now
 
Old 01-02-04, 04:18 AM   #11
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Quote:
Originally posted by LyricalJedi
Yeah I have to leave in the middle of the battle so I don't blame you for that vote hell I did not read his rhymes but hey I will read it now
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Old 01-02-04, 04:55 AM   #12
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Old 01-02-04, 05:30 AM   #13
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Old 01-03-04, 12:52 AM   #14
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Quote:
Quoted from LyricalJedi
What the fuck this nigga calls himself reflektionz
that spelling needs some correction
nigga you wack even if you don't think so
I drop mothafuckas like plinko
Nigga you die like Brandon Lee in the crow
so nigga give me the crown
Fuck it I shooting your blackhawk down you fuckin clown
This nigga smoking shit that fuck up his brain
battling me is like going out like Kurt covain


LMFAO...*SMH*
Ok that was disgracful..
Ya need help on ya
Flow, Structure, Punches, Personals,
EVERYTHING....
Overall....2/20
No hate.. just keepin it real




Quote:
Quoted from Reflektionz
This Jedi is in stored for battles scars that hit an kill newbs..
your outa barz .this aint star warz but let the force be wit u..
im instituting a beating on the weak that cant spit a sentence
my new years revolution was to drill mc's like i was the dentist..
im teachin a lesson.fuk a lyrical obeewakanobee wannabe..
honestly kid u thought ya mind wudnt start wondering..
threw sites lookin to copy an past pondering to leagues..
hopin to find an bite a verse that got punches up there sleeves..
I believe your 0-2 this wont be ya first W so ill leave speechless..
rap game just leave it.I aint playin like the disable at recess..
only time u spittin is when u sneeze bitch so regardless.
i new u was wak since day one.your just a starving artist..
takin hard hits from a vet in a newb disguise ..
quick to dimize a plan to unleash the wrath of a legend/VEt
u heading for mayhem..even if u was osama u cudnt be sending threats..
bending necks wit my text.i dont no why u tryed comparing ILL..
my punches knockin this bitch out he fell out his dads computer chair..
get killed quick i spray slugs an spit till i fry the mic..
this battles over quicker then me hitting submit reply..


hmmm...Thats better
Some good wordplay
Flow was pretty good
Structure was decent..needs a lil fixing
Punches hit nice an hard
Personals...not many
OVeral....15/20


Vote=Reflektionz
Simply cuz his punches hit harder
His verse was all out better than LyricalJedi's
Sorry Lyrical.. but ya need elevation.....
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Old 01-03-04, 12:54 AM   #15
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damn....Reflektionz pretty much ripped this kid pretty easy.....he had some nice punches.....good personals...and a few good metas.....Lyrical Jedi had a nice structure and flow though...here's a breakdown for u two...

BREAKDOWN
Metas - Ref
Wordplay - Ref
Punches - Ref
Flow - Jedi
Personals - Ref (star wars line)
RhymeScheme - Ref
Structure - Jedi
Overall - Reflektionz takes this hands down just for having a better overall verse.....kinda sucks though cuz he spit like twice the amount of barz.....good read from u both...no hate...just a vote...

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