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LyricalJedi | 0 | 0% | |
Reflektionz | 5 | 100.00% | |
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01-01-04, 06:42 AM | #1 | |
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LyricalJedi-Vs ReflekTionz
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u drop first checkin so i can start drop in 20 minutes lets do this a freestyle kid u down checkin |
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01-01-04, 06:44 AM | #2 | |
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Checkin in aiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigggggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhh ttttttttttttttttttt I will drop in my next line
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01-01-04, 06:58 AM | #3 | |
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What the fuck this nigga calls himself reflektionz
that spelling needs some correction nigga you wack even if you don't think so I drop mothafuckas like plinko Nigga you die like Brandon Lee in the crow so nigga give me the crown Fuck it I shooting your blackhawk down you fuckin clown This nigga smoking shit that fuck up his brain battling me is like going out like Kurt covain Explanation: Blackhawk duh where he is from lol smoking his occupation |
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01-01-04, 07:00 AM | #4 | |
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Good luck bro I am about to sleep and shit peace out let get these mothafuckin votes and shit vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvoooooooooooooooooooooootttttttttttt ttttttttttttttttttttteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee vote vote vote
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01-01-04, 07:04 AM | #5 | |
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This Jedi is in stored for battles scars that hit an kill newbs..
your outa barz .this aint star warz but let the force be wit u.. im instituting a beating on the weak that cant spit a sentence my new years revolution was to drill mc's like i was the dentist.. im teachin a lesson.fuk a lyrical obeewakanobee wannabe.. honestly kid u thought ya mind wudnt start wondering.. threw sites lookin to copy an past pondering to leagues.. hopin to find an bite a verse that got punches up there sleeves.. I believe your 0-2 this wont be ya first W so ill leave speechless.. rap game just leave it.I aint playin like the disable at recess.. only time u spittin is when u sneeze bitch so regardless. i new u was wak since day one.your just a starving artist.. takin hard hits from a vet in a newb disguise .. quick to dimize a plan to unleash the wrath of a legend/VEt u heading for mayhem..even if u was osama u cudnt be sending threats.. bending necks wit my text.i dont no why u tryed comparing ILL.. my punches knockin this bitch out he fell out his dads computer chair.. get killed quick i spray slugs an spit till i fry the mic.. this battles over quicker then me hitting submit reply.. |
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01-01-04, 03:55 PM | #6 | |
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Nice rhymes yo lets get some votes from the people on this piece I know keep real aiight. Just vote vote vote .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......................
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01-01-04, 09:03 PM | #7 | |
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yea nice
lets vote u[ppin on this shit nice drop kid not bad uppin onthi shit im tryna get votes. im keyed as fuk |
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01-01-04, 11:16 PM | #8 | |
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Reflectionz Got This..
His Punches Hitted Harder Than That Other Cat.. im instituting a beating on the weak that cant spit a sentence my new years revolution was to drill mc's like i was the dentist.. That Was Prolly The Best Line In This Whole Thread The First Catt...Elavate A Little Mo'' Vote-Relfektionz |
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01-01-04, 11:34 PM | #9 | |
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uppim thanks for the honest vote...............
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01-02-04, 01:45 AM | #10 | |
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Yeah I have to leave in the middle of the battle so I don't blame you for that vote hell I did not read his rhymes but hey I will read it now
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01-02-04, 04:18 AM | #11 | ||
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01-02-04, 04:55 AM | #12 | |
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01-02-04, 05:30 AM | #13 | |
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01-03-04, 12:52 AM | #14 | ||
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LMFAO...*SMH* Ok that was disgracful.. Ya need help on ya Flow, Structure, Punches, Personals, EVERYTHING.... Overall....2/20 No hate.. just keepin it real Quote:
hmmm...Thats better Some good wordplay Flow was pretty good Structure was decent..needs a lil fixing Punches hit nice an hard Personals...not many OVeral....15/20 Vote=Reflektionz Simply cuz his punches hit harder His verse was all out better than LyricalJedi's Sorry Lyrical.. but ya need elevation.....
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01-03-04, 12:54 AM | #15 | |
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damn....Reflektionz pretty much ripped this kid pretty easy.....he had some nice punches.....good personals...and a few good metas.....Lyrical Jedi had a nice structure and flow though...here's a breakdown for u two...
BREAKDOWN Metas - Ref Wordplay - Ref Punches - Ref Flow - Jedi Personals - Ref (star wars line) RhymeScheme - Ref Structure - Jedi Overall - Reflektionz takes this hands down just for having a better overall verse.....kinda sucks though cuz he spit like twice the amount of barz.....good read from u both...no hate...just a vote... peace
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