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10-02-03, 07:52 PM | #1 | ||||||
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is my shit worthy of this site?
IP: 34BF DD77
yo jus sum of my random battles from other sites...
.'anals-blades-addiciton'..''Addicted-to-friction''..this fag-raq-jerks'-smirkin at his ~'elton-john's'~-mag-subscription.. ~''thick-as-sh!t, vacant-between-the-eyeballs''~ potense ''needs-head''so knux Makes like ~'niagra-N-''falls'-kissin'..,~'impotent-dikk-n-two-balls'~ so this 'brady-bunch-gets ~''viagra-on-prescription''~... Anythin ~'sharp'~( blade ) you had is gone, so ya 'resorting' to using-substitutes',raq ~'swallows'~ too much c0ck..so now his 'flows-a-mute,like a DI orgy,his "throats-a-group"..only time ~''he-can-shoot''~ is 'upon-sight' of 'vengeance' in ~''cowboy-boots''~.... these 'bad-breath'ed-fags''~in-persuit of ~''mexican-prostitutes''~ but ''El'pee's''(L.P) raped-em'-all, so ya ~'make-do-wit-fruit'~..the battle's began D.I..its 'too-late-to-RE'Recruit''~.. screw' ~''faith-in-ya-bible''~,heres a-breif-~''de-script-shun''~,veng,LOOK-SON..im ~''replacin'-ya'-idle''~, cus ~''raq's-skills-are-FICTION''~... Get-the-picture?ma' flows-pure-contradiction-to-flow, nostra-damis couldnt-predict-the-show,but you only 'together' through the ~''male-rape-convictions..ya know..''~ (I)nverted-(D)icks, these-''gays'' are old'~''converted-pricks''~ c0ck'hungry-for-more..like an ~''absent-blane''~ throwin ~''deserted-tricks''~ well we ready-for-war.... When ~mommy's 'c0ck'hoppin,~ 'potense keeps'an 'ear-to-the-door',got 'perverted-wits'~.YER his ~''dikk's inches from-the-ground''~ but ONLY when-his ~''chests-to-the-floor''~.. another spit... This fag's-retarded, finds ~tampons behind his ear's~ then cant find his pencil~ argh thats why all his spits-are-shytt''..... lol... OK lemme start.. 'pre-writing?'blah,no'-surprise-,screamin~'jeepers-creepers'~ the way ma-spits ''devour-ya-eyes''....only takes A.B.C to ~''-cloud-ya-judgement''~, so ill be ~''empowering-sky's''~, delivering-ya-demise, this ''cats''scared so he gets a ''new-name'' an a ~''pussies-disguise''~.. ya 'all for show','titanic-dismay'', ya 'flows-a-wreck',minus-ya-array- ya require-plastic-specs, this ~blind~see's me ~''hustling-the-cards''~ so tha 'pussy' ~''hits-the-deck''~,... keep ya wits-in-check, you only ~''hot-spittin''~ subjected' to the ~''green-house-effect''~ Erase-ya-fate when ya 'stepping-in-hear,Wouldnt contemplate this whack-volunteer with ~''raq's-cum-on-his-chin''~ thats how vengeance is ~''reppin-his-peers''~,!!!Erectin-the-queer's, bragging how hes the ''anal-pioneer''~,, hott nights with ''george michael'' now ya ass got more dimensions than ya drops... Forget ''ripping him a new ass'' this kids got more ''holes than a second-hand 'dart-board''~,been used'n'abused,..beaten then 'rejected-by-wards'...ha!claims hes sharp,cus he 'dribbles' on his collection-of-swords,easily-gets 'erected-for-more' so now only affection-he-gets is at the ~''betty-ford''~ ( LOL!!! for you thick people... its the biggest alcoholic-drugs rehaab clinic worldwide) You one-dimensional kid, only contrast between ~''black'n'white''~ ''rap's'' you get is ~''lickin-sweet-barcodes'', only thing you defeating'-is-untamed-afro's''~ attemptin to beat-ya-meat an cum on ~''elton-john-logo's...''~ Oh Ohhh.. vengeance joined the club' of ~''untrained-homo's''~ Look on the ''bright side of life''~ ''kid..dont face'ya-screen''~ill ~''erect-it''~an show you the true ~''rise-of-the-machines''~ ..This 'fag' steps to me, he's rubbed the wrong-way..well his efforts bout-to-be~''stubbed''~..But rejection is usual, like his application to ~''george-michaels-FAN-CLUB''~ aight may be alot theres just two small battles i had.. hit me up on aim or msn for a chat or sum shit... peace.. L.P oNe |
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10-02-03, 08:28 PM | #2 | ||||||
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y niggas be peepin my stuff then not sayin shit??
come on man.. if u peep it jus give it a word aight? peace . one. |
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10-02-03, 09:31 PM | #3 | ||||
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This wasnt too bad, it was a pretty good read, you had a lot of multies i noticed, it flowed pretty decent through out the piecei thought, content was alright, overall it was a pretty decent piece, keep dropping.
and if you could return some feedback.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83050 |
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10-03-03, 07:34 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 5AF5 5CA5
quite a complex peice, an i like that, ya flow was tight aswell
quite good dawg |
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