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no d/r, no crew votes

first da 5 votes wins

thats basically it

checkin in and spittin first

checkin in

lets go, no hatrz.

yo lets drop dis shit

My Rap-Tactics, flow like Porno-Graphics/too hott da handle/
Droppin bombs while swingin axes/Muthafuckas call me Mickey Mantle/
try to shake me off like an Earthquake drop, dawg i just dont rattle/
I spit lyrical fury, homie u cant contest dis/
Got ya throwin up SHIT, lookin anarexxic/
Rhymes hittin yo so fuckin crisp/ leave ya paralyzed, dats y u have to text dis/
Forgot protection for ya weak ass erection, I'm bound da choke ya/
Cut ya insides wide open like a C-Section, spttin venom like a fuckin King Cobra/
Me n dis rap game go together like Peanut Butter and Jelly/
you fake, yo SHIT just dont MIX like 30 year olds and R Kelly/

yo bitch, aight
your shit is wack and flows like a bathroom leak,
take dis advice/rip your chords out find a tall building - leap/
my shit is too hard for niggaz to handle
dats why i battle bitches and wack artists reppin mickey mantle/
when i spit my flow give bitches orgasm better than rampant rabbit
i feedin my cock to yo bitch like banana wit sherbit/
motherfuckin you should watch coming rappin wit nuthin on me/
all you got skills for is syhillis gonarea and hiv/
your skills just aint embedded into your mind
ill mash you head into food for mine.

DaCROZofHB- nice job, u had some good vocab. ur flow was a little different, but i liked it. ur structure needs a little work. u could also get a few more metas in there. But u did good.
fuckdat- u did ok, not bad, but it was too basic i think. u had da flow and structure. but it was way to plain and boring, especialy towards da end. Work on ur creativity a bit, but u didnt do dat bad bro.

Vote: DaCROZofHB

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da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

DeCroz had this battle hands down. fuckdat had a weak feedoff of wut DeCroz spit N it ju couldn't add up. DeCroz didn't murder the punches but he did do e-nuff 2 take this battle. fuckdat's didn't really move me.

thanx keep uppin

My Rap-Tactics, flow like Porno-Graphics/too hott da handle/
Droppin bombs while swingin axes/Muthafuckas call me Mickey Mantle/
try to shake me off like an Earthquake drop, dawg i just dont rattle/
I spit lyrical fury, homie u cant contest dis/
Got ya throwin up SHIT, lookin anarexxic/
Rhymes hittin yo so fuckin crisp/ leave ya paralyzed, dats y u have to text dis/
Forgot protection for ya weak ass erection, I'm bound da choke ya/
Cut ya insides wide open like a C-Section, spttin venom like a fuckin King Cobra/
Me n dis rap game go together like Peanut Butter and Jelly/
you fake, yo SHIT just dont MIX like 30 year olds and R Kelly/

I thought your last 5 or 6 lines were pretty good- You had a little problem with structuring but your punches hit, and you got a couple good ones in- decent wordplay all in all i'd say your elevatin nicely... Good Verse

yo bitch, aight
your shit is wack and flows like a bathroom leak,
take dis advice/rip your chords out find a tall building - leap/
My fav line outta this whole verse of yours... I think if all of your verses were witty like this one I would have given you the battle easy..
my shit is too hard for niggaz to handle
dats why i battle bitches and wack artists reppin mickey mantle/
when i spit my flow give bitches orgasm better than rampant rabbit
i feedin my cock to yo bitch like banana wit sherbit/
This is where i stopped feelin it... rabbit and sherbit rhyme in the last syllable but it was obvious you were going for a multi, the punch was o.k but not stellar
motherfuckin you should watch coming rappin wit nuthin on me/
all you got skills for is syhillis gonarea and hiv/
your skills just aint embedded into your mind
ill mash you head into food for mine.

I think u started strong and kinda fell off... For whatever reason youre gonna need to come 100% for the whole verse next time without that drop off and You'll get urself some V's... Good verse though for new to RB.

My Vote- DaCroz

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Me n dis rap game go together like Peanut Butter and Jelly/
you fake, yo SHIT just dont MIX like 30 year olds and R Kelly/

lol

dacroz took this hands down, his structure was fine, it's text not audio remember, strucutre is different for the two. his multis were nice as well as vocab.

fuckdat just came weak, nothin of his verse really stood out to me.

vote: croz

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two and counting

dacroz took that shit he could have killed wateva the otha nicca said wit one line that R.Kelly shit

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Holla at me when u stop writing rhymes wit dictionaries shit is dead

thanx...just one mo vote someone read dis battle please i hit up ur battles