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01-13-04, 11:20 PM | #1 | |
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Conversion/./vs/./RedEye
IP: 6602 AC7B
10 lines
blind spit no feeding no c h d/r check in now..... start keyin asap after that due in like 15 minutes good luck |
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01-13-04, 11:21 PM | #2 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 6602 AC7B
checking in now........................
/./blah blah 50 characters woohoo/./ |
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01-13-04, 11:33 PM | #3 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 6602 AC7B
Name Redeye cuz u think u smoke herbs but u just pretendin
Look at ya lines i see ur avy's arms not the only thing extended You should get ya structure in shape take it to a health spa My punches bring heat and hate to ya chest like hell's bra Strangle you wit ya neck tie ta make you a killer professional Ya verse is holy with enough whack lines ta fill a confessional Lines 7 and 8 said u were great, but only at bein the head of disgrace Take it fed in ya face, cuz ya verse was simply red and made waste I'm settin tha pace, tha beatin's so quick u aint even let in the race Find a bed in tha lake.....i'm puttin you ta rest so you'll never awake |
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01-13-04, 11:36 PM | #4 | |
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IP: EC0B 84C7
Im Cuttin Conversion Wit Incisions/thats My Mission/call Me Dr. Redeye/ Fly In The Sky Like A Jedi/verbal Assult Feel The Pain/redeye Come Down On Your Ass Like The Rain/you Cant Handle Me/redeye From The Bsc/basic Smugglin Criminals/takin Folls Like You Out Weak Individuals/
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01-13-04, 11:46 PM | #5 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 6602 AC7B
upnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn...... ..........................
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01-14-04, 09:22 AM | #6 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 373A 0E81
upnnnnnnnnnnnn again............................................. .......50!
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01-14-04, 09:26 AM | #7 | |
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IP: C32F D75F
Umm..
Conversion takes this for sure... better flow, punches, structure etc.. Redeye had some nice vocab.. altho set out in a real wack way... sort the structure out for sure.. visit W.E.C.... It turned out like 2 bars vs 5 in the end.. Vote - Conversion Return the favour - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106503 |
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01-14-04, 09:29 AM | #8 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 373A 0E81
^battle me.................upppn......................set it up go ahed
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01-25-04, 07:58 AM | #9 | |
Flyweight
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IP: A26E 4629
upnnnn............................................ ........
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02-02-04, 03:52 PM | #10 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 5A51 7E09
upppn.,........................................... ............
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02-02-04, 05:47 PM | #11 | |
Flyweight
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IP: EB27 E87F
Here's how I see it.
Flow=Con, his flow had a much better structure which made it easier to read. Red, you need to work on your flow, it was hard to read which took away from your verse. Punches=Con, he had more punches that hit harder. Red, you need to work on punching, you didn't really come with any punches you mostly talked about yourself which isn't what your supposed to do in a battle. Personals=Con, once again, he had more personals that were better. Red, you didn't really come with any personals either, this is another area that you should work on, personals can win you battles. Vocab=Con, he had a lot more vocab in his verse than Red, it opened up his drop so that he could have made it even better than it was. Red, you came with pretty basic vocab, I realized this cause it's something I need to work on also, more vocab would help you open up the options while dropping a piece. Over all=Con, you came pretty good on this drop, it was a good read and had some good stuff in there. If you have anything to work on it's probably getting some metas or some more word play. Red, you need to work on your punches, personals, vocab, but for now you should focus on your flow. It really takes away from the read when everything all bunched up like that. If you work on those things it will really improve your drops. Vote=Conversion Please vote on my battle, thanks, here's the link. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108625 |
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