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08-26-07, 10:18 PM
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dope
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this every day life
IP: 06FC 7E7B
hey
Wake up everyday to find myself in a mess look out the window yo wondering wots next everydays the same shit running through the brain and getting my day ruined by a bitch drivin me insane playing on a game keeps the mind occupied im tired of life id rarther stay alone sometimes but ders always someone to try ruin ur own peace so wot do we do we fight with wot we speak i feel all the heat |
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09-03-07, 09:58 PM
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IP: 9204 9119
ehhh don't seem like u finished this up.....i dunno if u felt like just typing a couple lines down or u ran out of time...but yeah thats what it seems to me lol....o yeah and put more feeling into it...6/10....~1~
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Last edited by K-M : 09-03-07 at 10:38 PM. |
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