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Nigga,to you my rhymes are like drugs,when you take it,you get high&stupuid/
You ugly ,you'll neva get a girl,even if ya got shot in the ass by cupid/
You always rap bout how you got so much balls,but why you in a crew/
See,I fight on my own,unlike u,who hide behind wandering JEWS(his crew)/
Alone,there's nothing I can't do,I can even take out an entire nation/
Fuck with me and you end up in hospital as the doctor's patient/
And in my other battles,you be critising my raps,like I give a damn/
You givin me advise is like the son tellin the dad how to be a man/
Your name is JPoll,cause you into rock-n roll,and ur fav. is Blink 182/
Reading ur rhymes is like smelling poo,exact smell as ur crew/
And u canadian,so go back to puoring maple syrup on ur balls/
And leaving it for your mom to lick off,right in front of nigaria falls/
So,I bet this verse already gave you a big,nice shock/
So remember me,mother fucker,cause I;m the next PAC/

Ur turn JPoll,I'm a be back later.

first off...who was your shit really wrote for...because i'm not in a crew...and i've never voted on any of your battles...your terrible by the way...

just to let you know...

haha

this is too easy
here we go...

yo yo
You ain't on my level bitch

yo yo
Your rappin skills are like a slow net connection,
RB ain't a movie, ur clueless, n this isn't the 3 stooges ressurection,
0-3 haha, your as useful as a single solar panel,
you ain't got enough 'flow' to light a single candle,
your style ain't sick, your more like AL, all you rock is flanel,
and socks with sandles, guess what, it's KO, now get ur head on my mantle,
We're on different levels, your brutal, for me this battle is fruitless,
Your flows constipated,your not like Shady,you should be called Mr.Poop-less,
A lesson from JPoll-when writting have some punches,it's not good to just rhyme,
If you wrote that line, this one would say 3:08 is the time,
Don't cry, Mr. NY, yeah bs you'll never beat me on my net,
You aren't even the best rapper during the monks silence month in Tibet....


haha
get off my court bitch

JPOLL-won,punches were personal and direct...connected...ur vocab was good..ur flow was a lil off try 2 keep it all 2gether...

shady-man i can tell eminem ispired u,but i doubt he'd hire u,prolly fire u b4 he rejects u ..lol u are ok u just need to keep elevating,ur shit was basic..only good thing was ur structure and flow...kept it 2gether which i like

Don't cry, Mr. NY, yeah bs you'll never beat me on my net,
You aren't even the best rapper during the monks silence month in Tibet....
....^^thats the best and only hot punchilne in there....

Shady......u gotta whole lot of elevatin to do before u can even be considered to be a hot rapper...let alone compare ya self to Pac
Nigga,to you my rhymes are like drugs,when you take it,you get high&stupuid/
You ugly ,you'll neva get a girl,even if ya got shot in the ass by cupid/
You always rap bout how you got so much balls,but why you in a crew/
See,I fight on my own,unlike u,who hide behind wandering JEWS(his crew)/
Alone,there's nothing I can't do,I can even take out an entire nation/
Fuck with me and you end up in hospital as the doctor's patient/
And in my other battles,you be critising my raps,like I give a damn/
You givin me advise is like the son tellin the dad how to be a man/
Your name is JPoll,cause you into rock-n roll,and ur fav. is Blink 182/
Reading ur rhymes is like smelling poo,exact smell as ur crew/
And u canadian,so go back to puoring maple syrup on ur balls/
And leaving it for your mom to lick off,right in front of nigaria falls/
So,I bet this verse already gave you a big,nice shock/
So remember me,mother fucker,cause I;m the next PAC/
if u think this piece of shit is really hot....u need to retire with tha quickness....no offense....if u need to know what u did wrong...read ya lines...
Jpoll......u need to elevate too man...its was like 97% crap and 3% punches...

ok check it
shady you need to elvate a lil bit still your structure is better this time but punchs and personals still lack alot of work cause momma shit is played since 1996 if u use that dont exspect to get a win and sayin you the next pac? lmaoooooooooooooo dont do that either

jpoll nice verse decent punchs and personals some good wordplay but you should work on punchs unless you just didnt try after readin his verse i dont know and try and use more personals to the ones you did you werent that great

vote j poll

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Nigga,to you my rhymes are like drugs,when you take it,you get high&stupuid/
You ugly ,you'll neva get a girl,even if ya got shot in the ass by cupid/

^Weak Opener' .. WTF Kind Of Punch Is That Shit' ...!!!! 2/10

So,I bet this verse already gave you a big,nice shock/
So remember me,mother fucker,cause I;m the next PAC/

^Weak Closer' ..!! And Shit You Far From 'Pac's' ... Level!!! DAMN Boi Evelate..!! All I Have To Say!!! 1/10



Your rappin skills are like a slow net connection,
RB ain't a movie, ur clueless, n this isn't the 3 stooges ressurection,

^Alright Fair Opener!' ..... 7/10

Don't cry, Mr. NY, yeah bs you'll never beat me on my net,
You aren't even the best rapper during the monks silence month in Tibet....

^A Bit Of A Weak Closer' .. But Aight Better Than Any Of Shady's Lines' ..!!! 6/10

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lol
Straight up JPoll, that shady guys half ass weak.
My advise to Shady is to go read some tutorials and books and get back at us in a coupla years. You really dodn't have any clue who you were speakin too, you thought he was in a crew man lol. That shit was probably pre-written too, cos not even you knew where you were comin from. lol.

JPoll, not really much effort. Like u needed to put any in anyway. I liked the 3 stooges line an the candle one. Good punches an structure. I liked ur flow too.

Vote// JPoll

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