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05-01-06, 02:46 PM | #1 | ||||
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Call The Cops.. J.Summers-Shearkaughn..HOT
IP: E8B4 945F
Hit this up... Kaughn on first hook jsumms on first verse jsumms on chorus kahn on hook kahn on 2nd verse jsumms on chorus kahn on hook j. summers and shearkaughn on third verse kaughn on final hook damn... hahaha.. thats quite the switchup... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227368 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227452
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05-01-06, 08:37 PM | #2 | |||
OYD
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What's hot:
1st cat's flow on the hook reminded me of Pac 1st cat on the verse has a good flow Beat is entertaining Like the delivery of the 2nd cat's verse What's not: 2nd run of the hook was off beat Overall:decent hook...good flow/delivery...good beat...I wasn't buying the "yall gonna call the cops" as the hook...However, you do keep it simple, which is key to writing hooks...I just didn't like the lyrics in it. Good track though |
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05-01-06, 10:43 PM | #3 | ||||||
Whys That?
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solid .
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05-02-06, 09:24 AM | #4 | |||||||
Broke as hell
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IP: B8B4 D1AE
word thanks for the feedback..i'll get with J on that hook..i just noticed that shit...but good looks
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05-03-06, 10:18 AM | #5 | ||||
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yeah i shit the bed on that.... but still good ish.. peep game...
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05-16-06, 02:47 PM | #6 | ||||
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IP: E8B4 945F
up................................................ .
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06-16-06, 06:25 PM | #7 | ||||||||
Zar Bi-Shup
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holy shit. real tight song. I really liked it. You guys have the same flow and thats pretty cool so I give it 9/10.
nice.
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06-16-06, 06:29 PM | #8 | ||||
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IP: A68E 9D69
pretty nice...if you like the beat, check out ima boss, by tonyselfffffffffffff and i haha soooo many people using the same beats now-a-days
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07-17-06, 04:33 PM | #9 | |||||||
El Padrino
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IP: CFF5 B64A
Bumpin This Shit To The Tizzle
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07-18-06, 01:51 AM | #10 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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i like the person with the deep voice best on the hook shit
but jays verse was really hott i was prob feeling his best ionno track was pretty hott overall
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