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11-03-03, 07:55 PM | #1 | |||||||
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MCM - just a whack verse i wrote kmfrob - Lucid Blackness RnC - For the cause Aight....its been awhile since I've written a piece...been takin a break....but check this out an lemme know how ya'll feel about it.... I see it in the eyes of the devil...which explains the difference between heaven and hell The tension clinched fist aggression...with the sensation of anger beginning to swell They dwell upon my presence...ignore me when I speak...push me out of their way to get by Why try to defy my being...fingers pointed in my direction with the feel of a heartless cry Am I living a lie?...Constantly criticized about my words an all the drama that I'm bringing to life I only wanted to fly right...but they wanted me to barrel down into the ground without puttin up a fight Destroying a light that once made my future look bright...I ask myself what has come over the world A battle between the highest of lords...still I do not understand why I was chosen to be the one to award Like a sword in the stone...I'm not here standing alone...the evil itself is witnessed daily I look at the reflection of a normal person lookin back at me askin...why do they hate me? Equally...I am no better than the man next to me...every person has something that makes them unique It could be the way that you speak...or maybe your double jointed at the elbows and feet You must remember this speech...important to me...you must never judge any book by its cover Because looks are only skin deep...and a undiscovered world is found under Hate is not an illness...but yet an excuse for fulfillness of anothers problem they battle endless Together we can win this...say thanks for what you are given and continue to be ambitious We can't grant wishes...natural talent you were handed but expand it...lifes not easy...make it a challenge You'll get past it...the word that says more than a thousand...but causes a severe amount of damage Salvage yourself for a moment...rise your head up and believe in yourself and dreams you will achieve Look back at the fingers pointed at you...quick to remember...that HATE is only SKIN DEEP!
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11-03-03, 08:00 PM | #2 | ||||||
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THIS WAS A REAL TIGHT READ AND I HAVE TO SHOW LOVE ...INNER STRUGGLE REALITY AND LYRICAL DELIVERY ALL WORKED WELL FOR YOU
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11-03-03, 08:38 PM | #3 | ||||||
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ok, that was nice..from "together we can win this"to the end was my favorite part of it. keep it comin
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11-03-03, 08:42 PM | #4 | |||||||
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Thanks ya'll..........appriciate it......but can some of ya'll get deeper with the piece if ya feelin it?
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"Knowledge is intelligence. Intelligence is power. Mind is music, but music is forever." - Trip Marxx <font color="red"><font face="comic sans"><center>An you thought I was wack?</center></font> <h2><font color="blue"><center>-- Merkin You One Line At A Time --</font></center></h> <center>www.soundclick.com/tripmarxx</center> |
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11-04-03, 12:49 PM | #5 | |||||||
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uppin this piece
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"Knowledge is intelligence. Intelligence is power. Mind is music, but music is forever." - Trip Marxx <font color="red"><font face="comic sans"><center>An you thought I was wack?</center></font> <h2><font color="blue"><center>-- Merkin You One Line At A Time --</font></center></h> <center>www.soundclick.com/tripmarxx</center> |
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11-04-03, 10:30 PM | #6 | |||||||
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Uppin this piece again.....sum of ya'll check it out
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"Knowledge is intelligence. Intelligence is power. Mind is music, but music is forever." - Trip Marxx <font color="red"><font face="comic sans"><center>An you thought I was wack?</center></font> <h2><font color="blue"><center>-- Merkin You One Line At A Time --</font></center></h> <center>www.soundclick.com/tripmarxx</center> |
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11-07-03, 01:50 PM | #7 | |||||||
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uppin this piece.....
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"Knowledge is intelligence. Intelligence is power. Mind is music, but music is forever." - Trip Marxx <font color="red"><font face="comic sans"><center>An you thought I was wack?</center></font> <h2><font color="blue"><center>-- Merkin You One Line At A Time --</font></center></h> <center>www.soundclick.com/tripmarxx</center> |
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11-07-03, 03:04 PM | #8 | ||||
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Not Bad.. Could Use Sum Work
But Overall Not A Bad Drop... Not Great, But Dont Get Me Wrong You Got Potential, Just Gotta Keep Up On Your Game.. N' Elevate Sum Hook Up Sum Feed Back Here http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php? |
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11-08-03, 11:40 PM | #9 | ||||||
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Agree with above..elevate and you got potential..I was feeling it..peace
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