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it may take me few to type mine cuz im really fucked up

Aiight how many votes to win?

Good luck... Hurr go my shit...

All ya weak meta~phorical~phrases get SCORNED~to SHAME like JEWs that FORN~I~CATE
My words will TORCH~YA~FACE like eatin’ out a whore~wid~GENITAL~WARTS~&~AIDS

LISTEN ass~hole I’ll “LASS~O” ya verse to make sure~you~“HEARD”~I “SETTLE~THE~BEEF”
And I’ll AIR MAX ya NOSE IN to ensure ~you~ can~per~sonally SMELL~da~“FEET” (defeat) (dayum!!)

My words will turn you INSIDE~OUT so you can “IN”~“CHANT”~ya~sounds (“enchant”… think about it)
These sim~i~les slice you pretty much lit~er~ally AT~THE~KNEES so you can no longer “STAND~YA~GROUND”(fiyah!)

My PUNCHES will “FORCE” ya “AIR” out like NIKE and make niggaz wanna~“REE~BOX”
I’m come CLEANER than DE~TOX- Split ya ATOMS (Adams) so you can no longer~EVEs~drop

You finna “DREAD” how I’m “LOCK”~in~ya flow~down in this show~down
And dyin’ on “HANDS” and knees in ya HOME~TOWN is the only way you can “HOLD~YA~GROUND” (good god!!)

That's it... hahaha... Murder in tha 1st degree!! lOl... Now, don't keep me waitin' long ya hurr!! lOl... Good luck!

ill drop my verse in a an hour cuz i dont have but 2 min to do it now .................................................. ..................

iight sorry so long heres ma drop.................

Hes getting abase so whys he tapping his foot smile on his face bout to get shook//
mistook him for the garbage man hardly hes hard so parden me mam//
your versus are plainly menial as if you start with error then start trial//
Mile length stretched out spits heard you could flow but u just broke that myth//
hes an addict to drugs cuz rap didnt embrace him with an infinite amount of love//
If whackness is a skill then ill try your methods but i need a powerful pill//
more posts shouldnt make you flyweight especially when you bite lines from die anotha day//
Im fuckin you up with versus your unable to rehearse and use your mangled worse than a rubix cube///
rude nah this is just tha start ya battle lines dont match ya need to be debarred//
depart from r&b its not far fetched to say you didnt alarm me that you a whack emcee astray//
your shit fades fades faster than a denim jacket so sensitive it blows more than when a fat ass steps on a ketchup packet..//

sorry bout lines messed up cuz i really fucked up right now.....cant see screen worth shit...........

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Damn niggaz, can we get some fuckin' votes or what?????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ???????????????

Tay G took this one, his punches hit harder, he seemed more experenced, and his verse was batter overall!!!

no hate, both y'all had good verses jus one came better, an that was tay!!

peace



plz drop an honest vote on this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=105813

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iight uppin fo some votes............................................. .................................................. .....

tay G getz vote 4 betta thrown punches......better flow..n structure
close battle
n vitalz.....juss elevate man....ur shyt waz ite tho....
good lookz
~wunnnnnn~

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Uppin'........ More votes folks......... C'mon now...................

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lOl^^ Thanks 4 the advice, but no thanks. The ~s are there to show the multis and the caps are there to help the dumbfucks understand the punches. lOl

I forgot to say....
Drop a vote on this please since I took the time to do this

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106525

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