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09-29-04, 07:31 PM | #1 | ||||
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~The Cross~
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The Cross
Hook 2x I Carry The Cross The Virgin Mary Had An Abortion Born From Sick Organs Had To Through Hell As An Orphan Had To Bring It Back Underground I'm Happy That The Shit's Underground For The Council I'm Holdin It Down Eye Of The Storm Cynical Like Children Of Corn The Day I Was Born A Metal Nucules Was Formed Chromosmes Imuntites, Congruently Aligned With My Spine Combined With A Mind Through Images Invisioning Rhymes Perception Of Time Is Infinite Destructions Imminent Delivery Is Like An Aids Patient Was Spittin It Sicker Than Infected Dics In Anal Passages Rappers Are Faggots Wit Extacy Habits They Talk Tuff But Softer Than Rabbits Bastard Pillow Bitters Ruff As A Rider But Azz Got More Muddy Traction Than A Used Tire I Smell Something Fishy Fuk That I Smell Something Shitty The Game Is Too Pretty What Happen To The Rugged And Gritty Now Everybody Milking That Pop Shit Just Like A Titty But I'm Here To Tell You The Teething Done I'm Smackin Teeths Outta Gums The Final Destination Cause The Reaper Has Come I Punch Em At Best Slay Em To Rest And Snatch 50 Organs Outta One Chest Through Bullet Proof Vests Ya Kids Is A Mess Couldn't Be Considered Flawsy Wit Dental String Ya On Ya Chest Wit More Jedi Mind Tricks Than Yoda Using The Force Abstrakt..i Carry The Cross.. Hook2x Abstrakt I Spit Pain And Swallow Misery Shit Attrocidies In Toilets Of Clamidies Sanity Wipping My Azz Wit Humanty So Basically Who's The Shit? Ya Movements Are Constipated Straining To Duplicate It Like Gentic Codes Chromosomes I Was Cloned From The Bone Marrows Of Jesus And Mary Feeble Moans Born On The 27th Moon The Month After June From A Lioness Womb In A Sarcafagus Tomb Abstrakt Writen On Fabric Cloths Gathering Moth Deciphering Codes From Languages That Hasn't Been Talked Use To Drop Jewels But That's The Move Of A Clumsy Prophet Now I Take Aim At Brains Launching Rockets Outta Heavens Cockpit Lodge Spits From Hells Esophagus Torch A Metropolis Speakin Verses Of Firey Gauntlets Kick So Much Shit I Got Knees For Toilets Enuff Punchlines To Spar With Indenting Margins In Looseleaf Punches So Hard Brushin Ya Hair Is Fukin Brushin Ya Teeth Ab's Is A Beast Sniping Mcees An Stealing Cadavers For Feasts So Either Way You Taken A Loss Heaven Or Hell Abstrakt.. I Carry The Cross |
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09-29-04, 07:41 PM | #2 | ||||||
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Dope!! you got lyrcial skill . Change the way's it formatted. What i mean is there's word's from the next line in the previous line...........................................
Eye Of The Storm Cynical Like Children Of Corn The Day I Was Born A Metal Nucules Was Formed Chromosmes Imuntites, Congruently Aligned With My Spine Combined With A Mind Through Images Invisioning Rhymes Perception Of Time Is Infinite ,Destructions Imminent Delivery Is Like An Aids Patient Was Spittin It Sicker Than Infected Dics In Anal Passages Rappers Are Faggots Wit Extacy Habits They Talk Tuff .....But Softer Than Rabbits .. >>see what I mean ? Not sure if that's a typo or what. But if you fixed that the whole way thru . this will be dope... keep this shit coming....pz |
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09-29-04, 07:53 PM | #3 | ||||
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AIght Thanks For The Feedback Homie
Ill Work On That Thanks For The Advice ~1~ Any More |
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09-29-04, 08:41 PM | #4 | |||||||
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dope shit see thats why i got you as soon as i saw your open mic fix the structure like @ said and youll be a monster you got hella talent and madd vocab dope shit council is repping here PEACE
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09-29-04, 09:13 PM | #5 | ||||
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Hell Yea Council Reppin Ta The Fulles Fam
~1~ aNY mORE fEED |
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09-29-04, 10:15 PM | #6 | ||||
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Can I Get Some MOre Feed Please
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09-30-04, 06:50 AM | #7 | |||||
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09-30-04, 10:03 AM | #8 | |||||||
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hell yea that was hot u used good words n ur good at usin em too aight lata playa
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