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Old 01-27-04, 04:08 PM   #1
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what up playaz...


this is my first Audio... I composed the Beat and Wrote/preformed all the Lyrics... SO peep tha Jam and tell me what u think of the Beat, Production, Hook, and Lyrics... and if you have any suggestions on how i could elevate and be a betta Emcee holla at me... one...

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Peep Dat and Give Feedback... e-z
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Old 01-27-04, 06:05 PM   #2
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I don't like the intr s much. the beat is hot! your voice reminds me of necro a little. The 1st verse was dope. the scratching is ight. the 2nd verse was dope. I like the hook. the 3rd verse was dope. Over all it's hot!
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Old 01-28-04, 12:52 AM   #3
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nice look on tha feedback dawg...
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Old 01-28-04, 10:01 AM   #4
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yeah no prob, ur dope.
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Old 01-28-04, 07:13 PM   #5
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uppin fo some more feed... on3...
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Old 01-29-04, 02:48 AM   #6
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uppin' fo feed... come on peepz dont sleep this shit is Bangin'... support a mu'fukka...
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Old 01-29-04, 11:38 AM   #7
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damn... Dont Sleep People...
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Old 01-29-04, 04:30 PM   #8
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well i re-did some of the vocals.. so peep...
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Old 01-29-04, 04:39 PM   #9
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replie to my shit since i checked out yours repect

lol this shit's remids me of old skool nice delivery, just work on your voice

i rate a 7/10

nice line stick my dick in the earth screaming fuk the planet nice
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Old 01-30-04, 12:17 PM   #10
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no doubt I'll peep your shit when i have some free time.. nice look on the feedback...


Can I get some more feeback on this Track...
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Old 02-01-04, 03:06 AM   #11
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uppin fo ssome feed...


Yo dont sleep on this track it iz Tight....
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Old 02-01-04, 01:00 PM   #12
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uppin' fo some more Opinions on dis shit....
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Old 02-02-04, 02:07 PM   #13
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can i get some Love up in hea??
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Old 02-02-04, 06:29 PM   #14
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my shit is #9 on the Chart listings... tryin to get up the charts... hit up the Jam with some Feed... ya know Im tryin to elevate and i need feed to elevate...
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Old 02-02-04, 06:57 PM   #15
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* Listening *...beat is kool....Quality is Ok...Voice...Is...Like Kinda Catchy..Ya Know...Like It Seems Like Ur Hyped 1 Minute...The Next Minute...Its Like U Just Dont Kare...Ya Know...The Floww Is...So-So...Kinda Catchy Also....Lyrics Isn't That Great...But I Can Tell They Fit This Topic...As Well As The Beat...Its Just Basic...Ya Feel Me....Voice Is Aight....Overall...This Track Was Coo...Props Homie....

I Give It A 7/10...Not Bad...Just Work On Ur Emotion Homie....

If U Can...Check Out My New Song...47 Popstars....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111395

Feedback...Is Much Appreciated...Thanx Man...Stay Up...

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