check...........8 bars(16 lines) sound good?


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226673
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227020
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227027
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227018
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227028
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227021
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227025
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227019

checkin in..that sound good!

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The Scholar

Aight...

Precize..
Against me? Your drive to greatness'll get stopped so quick
cause only time your 'drops are appreciated' ..
........................................are 'when they're not posted'
Think ya ready to take a flower out of the winner's garden?
please, 'Pre is only known for little kids' ..
...............................like that 'school before Kindergarten'
You're weak, why'd you even bother to make the league?
when your avatar is the closest you'll get to a great emcee!
Never the best, so why is it a throne you're running after?
cause in text,
like 'women who dont care much about penis'..'Cize doesnt matter'
Ya rhymes'll get shattered, look, homie, I blam cannons
but your 'career seems to be going upward' ..
.............................................only when handstanding!
Leave you faceless regardless, but back to the basics: you garbage
never get signed, only way you'll 'have a deal' ..
.................................................. is 'after makin a bargain'
Thinkin ya hard, man? Boy, you is not felt, horrible drops, help
a vic in this battle is 'out of your reach' ..
.................................like an 'item at the store on the top shelf'

Rexless..
I'll put ya lungs on parole when I pop n leave ya chest gone
RV must be 'disliking college professors'..
...........................................cause we 'tired of Less-on'
Bullets glide through ya tephlon, you'll never make a deal
he 'took his ability' n 'threw it as high as he could' ..
..............................................just to 'elevate his skills'
Smash ya whole profession, blow ya neck in, you'll explode in sections
expose intestines, with explosive text n corrode ya chest with
unknown protection, then get 'ate in the morning' like a 'bowl of breakfest'
no contestant wanna blow them techs with no discretion
Show the message that this soldier's destined to give your soul a left kick
only way you'll 'pose a threat' is if you 'vogue with weapons'
Leave you so domestic, if you aint noticed, just quit, ya flow is just shit
fold ya methods, nigga, kill you and the hoe you stepped with
Its over, Rexless, ya close to death's midst, I'm not the foe to mess with
next time, take hold of lessons and learn not to provoke the best, kid ..

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The Scholar

my raps awesome..s writer scared, he knos i pack tall guns..
danjures wack n Rex in the Same Boat like rose and jack dawson..(titanic)
got skeletons in my basement, with nuttin but stains and smells..
oppourtunity never knocked for him...shit never even rang the bell
stab you with rusted nails n bike parts...that'll leave ya life scarred
last trick he had up his sleeve..bought him some right guard...
pavement bloody, rest of ya body fell to the ground and broke
...how do you like them apples?...shoved down ya throat...
i spit nice, but the rest is anger..cut off ya chest and fingers
........rexless pulled out scan trons tryna test my gangster...
way im abusin this keyboard they needa put my hands in prison..
meetin his doom..
the writings on the wall so much he got suspended for vandelism.

stay runnin past vets...murk ya ass next when i trash sets..
thinks hes father of rap? hes not got the DNA results back yet..
strap him in the dungeon, straight jacket on and handcuffed..
my rhymes got in his hair so much..i left with lice and dandruff..
brother ur basic, kill him and then leave the others with braces..
ive got this in the bag..the same one that he'll cover his face with...
rexless career so short he needs ladders to reach his fans..
im the zeus of rap, no wonder all my lines are greek to dan..
dish out all he can withstand...until hes too sick to balance..
his last verse was Sloppy...but still showed no Lick of talent
put halloween masks on, ripped ya five star and stole ya pens..
i use the wordPAD..he uses tampax and kotex ultra thins..
Rell murked rex..and ripher ruined Dan, n ill leave ya ass done too..
we didnt have to go to an Alabama college to see JackSon U...
be resemblin a pirate...peg leg, with a patch and all..
readin danjur verses n im...
seein alotta the same thing like gremlins at niagra falls..

Rexless no-shows. Now a battle between Precize and Danjure. Vote.

sumone vote plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

finally a vote....................

Upping over closed.

Never the best, so why is it a throne you're running after?
cause in text,
like 'women who dont care much about penis'..'Cize doesnt matter'
Leave you faceless regardless, but back to the basics: you garbage
never get signed, only way you'll 'have a deal' ..
.................................................. is 'after makin a bargain'

vs.

stab you with rusted nails n bike parts...that'll leave ya life scarred
last trick he had up his sleeve..bought him some right guard...
strap him in the dungeon, straight jacket on and handcuffed..
my rhymes got in his hair so much..i left with lice and dandruff..
brother ur basic, kill him and then leave the others with braces..
ive got this in the bag..the same one that he'll cover his face with...

V./ prec.

both good potential.

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Daubs MySpace

Never the best, so why is it a throne you're running after?
cause in text,
like 'women who dont care much about penis'..'Cize doesnt matter'
Leave you faceless regardless, but back to the basics: you garbage
never get signed, only way you'll 'have a deal' ..
.................................................. is 'after makin a bargain'

Vs.

stay runnin past vets...murk ya ass next when i trash sets..
thinks hes father of rap? hes not got the DNA results back yet..
brother ur basic, kill him and then leave the others with braces..
ive got this in the bag..the same one that he'll cover his face with...
rexless career so short he needs ladders to reach his fans..
im the zeus of rap, no wonder all my lines are greek to dan..

Good battle just between you two, both has some nice lines and some that were not so nice….but Precize came pretty hard, and some of his other lines were close to being quoted…Danjure, you are doing the right thing just keep elevating

Vote - Precize

Never the best, so why is it a throne you're running after?
cause in text,
like 'women who dont care much about penis'..'Cize doesnt matter'
eave you faceless regardless, but back to the basics: you garbage
never get signed, only way you'll 'have a deal' ..
.................................................. is 'after makin a bargain'
Show the message that this soldier's destined to give your soul a left kick
only way you'll 'pose a threat' is if you 'vogue with weapons'

vs.

stab you with rusted nails n bike parts...that'll leave ya life scarred
last trick he had up his sleeve..bought him some right guard...
brother ur basic, kill him and then leave the others with braces..
ive got this in the bag..the same one that he'll cover his face with...
Rell murked rex..and ripher ruined Dan, n ill leave ya ass done too..
we didnt have to go to an Alabama college to see JackSon U...

I got Precize taking it, the quantity of the quotables were equal, so I had to go for quality

v/Precize

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