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Check in by: 09-06-04 at 10:53 PM

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Ekademic21 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 10:23 PM.

SoLe has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 10:23 PM.

while i stand on ya block, wit hands on my glock to dismantle ya knot/
the only way you hittin the big time is boxin with grandfather clocks/
Hobo, your poor Ass cant afford to be in a fight wit me/
This Young Buck aint seein Banks, like some sorta g-unit rivalry/
Feel free to plummet whenever, cause I just stomached ya letters/
I put shoes on my bullets, so when I pull it, they can run in ya sweater/
You're wack blah blah blah, something something you suck/
Why finish him with a closer...his career's "finished" enough/

that was the lamest 5 lines of my life lol....g/l

got u fucked up like u smokin canibis
i ask u a questions u wouldnt wanna answa dis
my 4 year old sis could but out a betta diss
im really not as mean as i seem
i jsut wanna fuckin slit ur throat while ur in ur dream,
kidnap ur bitch and have her fuck me till i cream
follow me and do actually as my lyrics read
slit thraots and fuck pussy till it bleeds

Voted For: SoLe

both were wack jus to start off lots of elevating needed

but i;ll give it to you because you had better structure and better word choice those were the only reasons, seriously work on your punches , cuz man that wasnt even relevant,

"I put shoes on my bullets, so when I pull it, they can run in ya sweater/
You're wack blah blah blah, something something you suck/"


they should close this thread just for that retarded shit , even i wouldnt say that

but yea you toke it sole
o yea dont forget to elevate and no hate


vote//sole

toke? gawd i must be semi retarded look what this thread has done someone close this please

Voted For: SoLe

your punches hit harder then ekademic's, nice flow from the top to the bottom... but it would have been alot better if you had a real closer.

return the favor tho.. big up

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